March 18th, 2010 at 05:44am
I just caught up with last two updates and I must say that I do like the story, but I am starting to get bored by it. What I mean for this is that the story have been going on for about 50 chapters now and we are not one step closer into finding out anything about Jackie for one, Even, Anna, or any of the other character. I thought once the chapter was coming up when Jackie revealed what he was that we would get to find out all of that info with Gee, but we didn't. Instead we are left in the dark still with no sense of light. All we know now is that Jackie's mother did some f up things to him and his father really didn't help.
Also, to go along with that we have not found out about Anna. We got the jest of it, but not the full story, I thought that that would be revealed so that we would have a sense of insight on the other characters while we waited to find out about Jackie, but yet again there is nothing.
I like this story I really do, but I really starting not to like these long drawn out chapters that seem not to go anywhere and if they did it takes a few more chapters before it gets to the point. I just hope this is not one of those this is a 400 chapter story where it just keeps going and going without finding out about anything.
Some people may want to rip into me now, but thats just my view. I feel that this is starting to go now where, but I will see what the next few chapters hold.
. The sun was long gone, the only light to be found in the sky being the glows from the streetlamps to the front of the house, and the yellowish bulbs that shone down into the backyard from the side of a neighbor’s garage.
And the mention of Contessa being "fiery" and Jackie's "fiery red hair". It created a really wonderful atmosphere and fitted the mood well. Fire can be dangerous but is also really alluring. I could relate that back to Gerard returning to Jackie's tattoo of a bullet, despite it being a very personal issue.
I thought you handled that touchy subject very well, actually. It's so easy to just recite a scenario with no emotion, but you didn't. I could understand why we only heard what we did. Gerard doesn't need to know everything, nor do we. In some ways having the readers fill in the gaps is very interesting, to see what different theories people have. I'd actually rather not recite what I'm thinking, it's pretty abstract and may not even make sense.
Bah, the Fitzgeralds get to have fun together. I'm jealous. I have a new favourite room in the story, too. (Sorry Jackie's bedroom.) But Aunt Dina sounds so amazing and that kind of thing is what I've dreamed about having on my walls. A whole of drawings that don't have to conect, but can just exist side-by-side.
Evan Wise will never stop being gorgeous. "Pass the rest along..."