No Man's Land - Comments

I LOVED IT. :D

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Well, even if it's a relative filler I'm enjoying it. I liked the focus you put on Gerard's feeling towards The Headless Choir and Cynthia etc. Because nobody's perfect. It was good to see some natural emotion coming through there.

And Evan's family! So...true to Evan, even if they aren't biological, it suits him so much.

I would love someone to buy me a lizard, even if it wasn't from Arizona.

(Also, couple of places where there should be new paragraphs. You'll probably know what I mean. The paragraph about Jeffrey, and I vaguely remember seeing another one, but now I can't remember where now.)

I'm excited for Evan. I want to see his new present soon, missy.
I like how the chapter is more than just Gerard and Jackie, like the person above me said. I like how it's about Evan, Contessa and Cynthia, and how we get to know their pasts (somewhat).

Although, I would've liked a bit more Lucky. ;) I love his character.

Wow, just wow darling, I mean, this chapter was amazing. Just the fact that it was focused more on Contessa and Cynthia and babies is great. Finally Jackie doesn't get all the attention. He's worse than Ray's fro! Tsk.

It's sweet of Gerard to be all worried about Jackie and concept of babies and a famiy when he doesn't even know for sure what Jackie's gender is. It's sort of adorable and yet understandable from Gerard's side of the story.

Anyway, good luck with your finals and uhm..great update! Again!

Thanks for the update. Tess is a crazy one. In fact the whole THC is crazy. And hahaha Gerry likes Beth. I knew it. He thinks she's hot, but to afraid to start a relationship. She clearly likes him as well.

Great chapter as per usual. Sorry it took me ages to read it, Ive not been on the computer much.

“Honey, it doesn't really work like that if the other man isn't gay.”

“A minor technicality, Cynthia m'dear.”

Absolute class. More soon.

i'm sorry! it's taken me, like, a week to comment! I've been busy

i'm sorry your laptop died. I just went through the same thing (she says as she types from her brand-new laptop)
I barely managed to save my music. Anyway.
comment time

SO ADORABLE. Jackie and Getard are the only ones who would make out in a waiting room. Poor Gerry! What's with this "Beth"? his girlfriend? Hmm? Gerry deserves some happiness. Please, please, give him a girlfriend so he will be happy and won't shoot Evan when it finally sinks in to his stupid thick skull what they've been trying to tell him.

anyway.
i'll stop now.
just one more thing
you are amazing and i cannot wait for the next update.

First of all, Wow!

I've heard people going on about this story a lot, so I thought I'd see what the hype was all about, and now I take back anything I've ever said about fan-fiction.
This story alone has given me hope for fan-fiction everywhere. :XD

I'm not going to leave a big ass review, because it would probably look quite pathetic compared to the others you've got.

So I'll just come out and say it, this story is magnificent <3

:cheese: So amazing.
Just. I'm so jealous I wanna shoot myself in my eye.
:cute:

Yay, another chapter! :D You're quite fast with the updates now, and I'm loving it.

I love Jackie and Gerard's relationship, as I think I've said before: the way that they can talk without effort and how you describe it, like they were meant to be but not in a 'I need to fuck you NOW' kind of way. There's intimacy without being... intimate. XD

All of these new characters you bring in shock me - not because the characters themselves are shocking, but it shocks me that you have so much imagination! All of these people have completely individual backstories and their personalities are never similar to anyone elses. Like Contessa, Vladimir, Lucky, Deuce and Matty; completely imaginative but completely brilliant. How do you do it?!

I sound like a fangirl. :cute:

There, four pairs of eyes were staring back down at them hopefully; thumbs were twiddling and whining sounds not unlike those Winston made when awaiting a treat were being made.
Aw, that was cute and original. :D Even though I've only just met the characters, I can imagine them doing that.

I don't know what else I can stay without sounding like a complete fangirl. :D But, of course, it's as amazing as ever.

I'm a horrible reader T.T I haven't commented in a long while.

I LOVE THIS STORY and feel bad about disappearing.

Whatev, I'm on the ball now :D

Mmm. Goodbye, Evan...hello, Deuce. I'm liking his character a lot even though we've only seen a bit of him.

*Not sure if I spelled 'Deuce" correctly. Too lazy to go back and check.

I didn't comment the last chapter
simply because I am a terrible commenter
and at the time It was so late into the night
or early morning
that I could not think of anything, let alone a response to a story

To the point
that sounds like one amazing party
If only real life were like this story
it would probably have nothing to do with me whatsoever

and this comment doesn't make any sense at all

Oh my god, so many people yet you did it so well that it's awesome. I love the fact that we finally know the other band that Jackie talks about so much, they're quite the interesting bunch are they not? And awh at Gerard not feeling comfy enough in Jackie's house because of all the people, I'm sure I would be the same but eh, this is Gerard after all. I do love how Gerry tries to get Anna a boyfriend or a good match while she already has Evan and he doesn't even realize it even if it's right in front of his nose. Alcohol really makes him blind doesn't it?

I think they're addicted to the emergency room, don't you agree with me on that part? Man, no surprise the nurses are grumpy around them sometimes, with their track record, they should just decide to live there in the waiting room, I'm sure Jackie and Gerard wouldn't even mind, considering they're already comfortable enough to make out in it. Poor Gerry. He's jealous of Jackie and Gerard, of all people. He really needs a girlfriend, or just get laid once in a while, that would make everything MUCH better I'm sure.

I like this, and it doesn't seem that short since it's so well written! I love the members of The Headless Choir already, and how they have a keyboardist. It seems fitting, for no obvious reason. Just something different - or at least not so common - makes them even better.

One thing that did catch my eye and make me wonder was the brief mention of Gerard and Jackie making out in the hospital. I'm fifty-fifty about whether or not I like it. I'd like to think they have more decency than to that. I mean, wouldn't there be other people there? Or was it just Gerry? And even so, you'd think they might show him that courtesy.

But I guess I can see that they do both miss the time where it's just them (even if Jackie hasn't really said so, I guess he would) and maybe if it's only Gerry they think "stuff it"? Ah, I don't really know which way I'm leaning more towards. You're the author....

But I really enjoyed it, especially Deuce. So sweet.

I absolutely adore this story. I love how you had Billie Joe call. =D

Ah, I haven't commented in ages. I just finished reading the two last chapters... late I know.
They were awesome as usual, I liked Chapter 43 more though.
I love how you get an insight in their home-life through Gerard as he reflects over things Jackie and Evan would consider normal.
Cynthia scares me for some reason, I can understand why Gerard got awkward around her :XD

This part had me laughing for 20 minutes:
“I knew it!” Jackie gasped. “He did kill you! Oh my god, there’s a dead man in my house!”

“Are you a zombie?” Gerard’s voice was stuck somewhere between fear and amazement.

“Gerard, get my shotgun!” Jackie said, rising to his feet and glaring at his now amused-looking friend. “Evan, answer me this—do you suddenly feel as though you have a craving for…brains?” :lmfao

Okay, so one? This is fucking amazing. Two? You're fucking amazing.

I read this over two to three days and it blew me away. I was kind of sceptical at the beginning of this because I was like, 'how the fuck can you not know someone's gender? Duh.' But man, have you written him androgynous alright. The way you've kept his gender a secret is so well written. :cute:

In fan-fiction Frank is usually written as the hyperactive child-adult, but you have managed to do it without being terribly cliched, and making it hilarious in the process, so well done. :cute:

And Gerry is a douche. I mean...THEY TOLD HIMMMM. :mrgun:

Some of my favorite quotes are: “I like tour buses. They’re all…rectangular. Not square. Fuck squares. Rectangles are so much cooler than squares.... And octagons? Man, fuck them. Fuck a whole lot of them.”

"I got a text from her saying ‘MERCH GIRL DOWN. I REPEAT, MERCH GIRL DOWN,’ which I take to mean that she’s on some awesome pain meds right now…”

So yeah...osm. :cute:

and sticking in the Billie Joe Armstrong reference was prettty genius. :D

You're amazing.

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