August 31st, 2010 at 12:10pm
This Is Only A Test - Comments
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Oh damn, I hope her parents to go to hell since I hate it when they control Sophie. :/ Grr!August 31st, 2010 at 09:19am
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I just sat here for 2 hours reading this entire story thus far.
I LOVE it. It's freaking AMAZINGAugust 31st, 2010 at 08:38am -
That is so sad. I know they'll reunite soon. <3August 31st, 2010 at 06:26am
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* "This is good shit,"
Those should be apostrophes since Mike is talking from Billie's point of view..August 29th, 2010 at 11:28pm -
Loved it!
I'm so happy you're continuing!
I found a few errors though, not a big deal...
“It’s called setting a bar, Jamie,” Mike informed her, fiddling with a tuning peg on his instrument. “Billie wrote ‘American Idiot,’ said, “This is good shit,” and then we made every song after that better than the former.” His fingers struck the string, the tone now satisfactory to his ears.
Those "'s should just be apostrophes (')
You forgot to italicize:
In a house with unlocked doors
And I'm fucking lazy.August 29th, 2010 at 11:27pm -
...I was so fucking happy when I got the email that you updated I legitimately sqealed and grinned so wide it would come close to putting a Mr. Tre Cool to shame. Loved the two chapters, Billie Joe is such a sweetie. I love Tre though, Tre will always be my favorite <3.August 28th, 2010 at 03:56am
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Ah...a concert chapter. How I love those. I know how it feels to watch Green Day. :)August 28th, 2010 at 02:26am
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Yay! So glad to see you back ;]
those updates were just lovely!
:DAugust 27th, 2010 at 09:03pm -
That was a wonderful chapter. <3
And welcome back. :)August 27th, 2010 at 07:03am -
I gave on this story for while, but I like it so now that I have caught up another chapter would be great cause this is good.July 31st, 2010 at 08:43pm
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-sticks head through computer screen-
Hello? Is anyone there?
-Le Gasp-
Are you alive??July 17th, 2010 at 05:48am -
great story ! cant wait for an update :D ;DJuly 14th, 2010 at 04:11pm
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Update soon? It feels like it's been ages...June 28th, 2010 at 11:17pm
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If Sophie's taken Billie Joe, I'll gladly have Tre, ha.(: Gahh I love him so much. Tre is just hilarious, Mike is the freakin' bomb, Billie Joe is...well, something I can't type ;) and Jamie and Sophie are the coolest girls ever, I so wish this was real ! (:
Another awesome chapter, how do you do it?! I found myself awwing out loud at a lot of parts, and now I am once again itching for you to update. Don't make us wait any longer, ha. (:June 18th, 2010 at 01:13am -
Hmmm....I don't think I've come across one that's ripping off this fanfic, but I have come across one that is very similar to The Last Of The American Girls which really pisses me off because that fanfic is amazing and so is its sequel. This fanfic is also amazing! So if I indeed come across a story that is ripping off this one, I shall tell you ASAP!
Well, another intriguing update as per usual! Can't wait for more! :]June 17th, 2010 at 08:01am -
Awhhhhhhhhhhh BJ wrote a song for her!
And he was embarrassed. That was cute.
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Not looking forward to her having to leave the Armstrong household though.
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this chapter was quite cute :3 i love how bj got embarrassed about it. xDJune 17th, 2010 at 02:11am
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i love your story its great pls pls pls update soonJune 17th, 2010 at 01:47am
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I actually love this story *subscribes* :DJune 16th, 2010 at 10:43pm
Billie Joe makes me sad when I imagine him crying, poor poor Billie-Bear. I can't wait to see what happens with this stick-up-the-ass mother of hers though.