Just To Be With You - Comments

I get WAY too excited when I see the email for this story lmao.
An update must happen ASAP! I can not take this cliffhanger! Hey were finally happy, if it gets ruined I'll be so upset!

OMG you can't leave me at a cliff hanger..lol i am so nervous about what she has to say maybe she knows the girl that slept with Zach.. great update..can't wait for more...

I am loving that they are back together, hopefully it stays that way.
But I am slightly nervous about what she has to tell Sarah. I hope it isn't too bad :S
Great update !!

Aw that was really good! I loved it! <3

Always great updates hun, so glad things are working out for these two..i really hope they stay together...update again soon!!

Scary title to that chapter - I'm not gonna lie

but the bastard part of me that was currently in control kept me from answering all of her numerous phone calls. - - I'm covering my ears and humming. I refuse to believe he has a bastard part. I'm in denial.

“What are you talking about? I’ve never seen you happier than when you’re with Sarah.” - - finally a voice of reason.

“Maybe I should just go fuck someone else again. You know, make it easier on her to walk away.” - - I'd like to strangle him!

“Then what the fuck do you want Zach? Huh? Cuz I’m tired of trying to help you figure it out.” - - I love Travis.

He took a deep breath and finally turned to face me before getting down on his knees so that he was closer to my level. “I really fucked up.” - - I gotta say - I'm glad he told her the truth. He could have easily blown off the reason he was MIA.

“It’s for your other hand. I’m keeping your left one free until I deserve to occupy it once more.” He held my right hand in his and looked me deep in my eyes. - - Awww Zach. Man they both have fucked up. I hope they start forgiving each other.

I just don't think these two can live without each other. I think it's more than they can't be happy without the other, I think they physically need each other.

They both have a lot to forgive. I hope they do it soon. I love this story.

I absolutely loved this chapter
I know how hard it is to lose a grandparent and I'm glad Zach stopped being so stubborn/stupid and came back to help her get through this.
also, i'm sad that this story is almost over :(
it's in my top 3 for all time favorites on here
please update soon : )

So happy that Zach finally stopped being stupid!
I really hope those two can get back to where they were before everything happened.
Loved the update !

im going to be so upset when this story is over. </3.

Glad Zach came to his senses!
I think Sarah should trust him again...I don't think he's gonna mess up anymore!
Loved it, looking forward to more! <3

I absolutely loved this chapter..very cute..so glad Zach go his head out of his ass and they talked some sense into him and talk to sarah and he was there for her..i am gonna be sad when this story ends because it's one of my favorite..looking forward to a Tazer story though...update again soon!

i love the story lets go zach!!!!!!!!!

yeah Andy made me mad in this chapter...
hopefully Zach doesnt listen to him
please update soon : )

I would have given anything to change what I’d just heard; I would have given anything to have been there for Sarah. She’d been raped and I wasn’t there, it was enough to kill me. - - THis just shows that what happened to Sarah also happened to him and he's still affected by it.

I threw my arms around her and pulled her to me almost as fast as I sat up. “I love you.” I crashed my lips onto hers with such force I was sure I cut off her air supply. - - awww - he just loves her so much. It's amazing. It's true love when you truly put the other person before yourself.

“I’m tired of hearing that!” I screamed frustrated. “Guess what! We’re pretty much together, Sar! You broke up with Marc to be with me. You love me. I love you. What are you waiting for?” I didn’t mean to yell at her but I couldn’t help it. - - YES Tell her Zach. Make her see it your way. Cuz I agree with you.

“You’re sure about that Zach? What if we get back together, tell everyone and they get all over you, try to convince you that you’re nuts for being with me again and you realize they’re right?” - - I was going to say - this is Zach we're talking about. He loves you unconditionally - he's the last one to get doubts. Then I read the end ARGH!!!

She’s a nice girl, one you probably shouldn’t have fucked over, but you did and she certainly moved on. I don’t mean to come across heartless, cuz I know what it’s like to love and lose…but it’s time for some fresh pussy. - -WHOA - shut the fuck up.

I loved Sarah. I did. But Andy shook me to my core. I needed time to think things over. - - NOOOOOOO! You gotta be kidding me. You just got her back.

I felt my phone buzz in my pocket and picked it up only to see Sarah’s name glaring back at me. I looked at the phone in my hand and felt my heart drop in my stomach as I took a deep breath and sent her to voice mail. - - You don't need time - stop this craziness. You LOVE HER!!!!

Wow. I gotta tell you the end really bothered me. I'm shocked he'd have doubts. She's all he's wanted for months and months and now she's right there and he listens to his teammate? I know he'll see the light. I know they'll live happily ever after, but I'm surprised and disappointed in him for having these doubts.

Now you have to write another chapter sooner so you can prove me right - that he's going to get over this very quickly.

I am not liking this Andy guy ..lol just as soon as things were getting better they are going down hill again..hope they can work things out..great update ...hope your holidays were good..can't wait for more!

Andy is an idiot...Zach needs to ignore him!
Can't wait for more! <3

“I shouldn’t have done what I did. I regret it everyday, I-I wake up in the middle of the night in hot sweats from nightmares. I’ve never given up hope that we were supposed to be together, I never stopped loving you for even a second and…”

I didn’t know how to silence him, how to interject so that I could say my peace. So I did what I knew would get his attention. I quickly pushed my head up the few inches and pressed my lips to his. - - YES Kiss away. I'm ready for this whether they are or not. I want them kissing and getting back together. :D

“Just give me a second, okay?” he said mischievously.
“For what?” I wrinkled my brow as he stood up and I got out of my chair.
“I have one last shot, don’t I?” he flashed a smile as he picked his ball up and headed for the lane. - - I so see Zach being that competitive It's cute.

“You think we can come back from it? From everything?” -- YES

“No you’re right. We need to do this the right way. I’ll go grab some drinks— do you have sangria or beer in the kitchen?”
I looked at him displeased. “No, I don’t have any of that crap, and I don’t plan on it.” - - Well that seems like the right thing. Zach should be proud.

I leaned down and kissed the tip of her nose, completely content. “So what happened? I thought you wanted to take things slow.”
“For you and I, that is slow.” - - I think that probably is true. I think it's hard not to fall back into old patterns and going back to what makes you feel good, what works for you as a couple is perfectly natural - even though it was initially against her instincts.

So glad to see them happy together - whether it is official or not. I hope now that Sarah will realize that it's time. It's time for her to let it go. She needs to forgive him. Zach has forgiven her.

More please!

oh dont worry I am still invested
I've missed this story a lot
I'm so beyond ready for finals to be over... I'm needing a break from school.
loved the update. definitely worth the wait
please update soon

Amazing! I loved it! <3

Still invested! Pleaseeeeee keep going :)