Just To Be With You - Comments

ahhh. yayy! im so happy they're.. what ever they are(: hahahaha.

love it..very cute..i am so happy that they are actually working things out and getting along..i really hope things work out for them...can't wait for more and a Tazer story..update again soon hun!

please, please, please update soon! I'm obessesed :) great job and pleaaaase update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved them in that chapter! So good, can't wait to see how bowling goes! <3

Everything seemed clear all of a sudden. I knew I couldn’t keep pretending with Marc, and as hard as it was to watch his heart break I knew it was the right thing to do. - - this does break my heart – but I know girls out there that will worship him. Me for example giggle.

I thought you might be hungry. I know you’ve been working long hours. No need to respond. Have a good night, I’m still here. I always will be. - - Zach is perfect – simply perfect

Thank you. You’re wonderful. - - He is and I’m so glad she’s seeing that now.

“No, I never really wanted to give it back. It means too much to me.” I wasn’t so sure we were still even talking about the damn hoodie - - This is such great writing. I love this.

“Oh really?” he asked in a mock surprised tone. “You’re kidding! You two kids seemed like you had what it took to go the distance.” - - I love how Zach lightens the mood here. :D

felt his lips graze my cheek and the warmth of his seductive breath on my ear. “Do you want to go bowling?” - - ROFL - I so wanted a kiss, but this just made me laugh.

I know they need to trust each other again and I know they have a long way, but I can’t stand it. I need them to be together. They know each other so intimately, that I can’t help but think they are just going to have to leap. I want them to leap – hows that. I’ll try to be patient. But that’s what I want.

Loved this chapter.

I'm so happy Sarah had Zach share the pizza together so cute..i really hope she forgives him and they can get back together..great chapter..update soon!

*squeals* omfg! i need a new chapter ASAP!!!
im so excited Sarah's finally going to go back with him! like the anticipation is killing me!

Wow I loved it. Zach and Sarah needs to get back together I live them together. Update asap

yayyyyyyy I'm glad she broke things off with Marc
hopefully Sarah and Zach will be back together soon : )
lovedddd the update : )
please update soon : )

“Mmmm Zach.” She looked up at me, her eyes brighter than I’d seen them in a while. “Am I dreaming?” she asked through her fog. - - No I think it's my dream. Yours too right? But not a dream for you Sarah!

“Hey…hey…don’t do that. Don’t push me away now.” - - I'm with him on this one. LOL

I..I’m not ready.” - - to me this is a relief. She's not ready, but she's not saying no. She's not saying never. So I'm optimistic.

I confess that I feel terrible for Zach. How can he do anything but Sit and wait for her.

“Zach.” Marc looked at me with a straight somber face. “Sarah broke it off.” - - I know this is very good news, still feel bad for marc. I keep telling myself that we'll take care of him later. :D

-“I love her you know.” Awww poor MStaal

“I know there are two sides to every story and I know you went and messed up first, but Sarah derailed pretty damn bad. I mean, I even questioned her at one point. To see you here, the concern and overall love you have for her…” she looked away and then back at me, her eyes wet with faint tears. “God really couldn’t have picked out a better man for my best friend.” - - He is amazing.

Zach is amazing. I hope Sarah comes around and realizes him. I hope when they get back together that she holds on to him with everything she's got. I want to see them happy I really do.

Poor Marc

I think Sarah taking a break is a great idea. But soon. Please go back to Zach soon OK? Thanks.

Great Chapter.

I'm happy she broke things off with marc, esp after everything with Zach..i am really hoping they get back together..great update...looking forward to Toews story too!

Thank goodness she broke it off with Marc! I feel a little bit bad for him but I'm sure there's a girl out there for him who wasn't meant for Zach! :)
Great update, looking forward to more!

I loved the end to this chapter! I'm tired of reading about Marc, I want him GONE!!! :)

Zach looked down at the ground before lifting my chin up with his fingers, forcing me to look him in the eyes. “I miss you.” His words were so soft I could have sliced through them like butter. Everything inside me sunk. My eyes were as wide as saucers. My lips quivered. “I…I miss you too.” - - THis feels like a good sign.

“This is the first time you’ve actually talked to me. This is one of, if not the first adult conversation we’ve had in I don’t know how long. That’s progress wouldn’t ya say?” - - another good sign :D

“Zach?” He snapped his head around so fast; his eyes nearly bulging out of his face. “What the fuck was Zach doing there? You went out with him?” He was pretty angry. I would be too if I were him. - -I do think Marc has a right to be mad about this. just sayin.

“How would I feel--Sarah how the fuck did you feel when he fucked that other girl? Was he thinking of you? Did he stop and think about how you would feel when you found out before he plowed her? Why should you give a shit how you make him feel? Way I see it he deserves what he gets.”
- - I think Sarah needs to decide if she can forgive Zach. If she can the she needs to stop things with Marc. Time to forgive Zach Sarah!

“Can’t say I blame him. I’d wanna spread her long legs too. Hey, she’s gone through two of my teammates, I’m sure she’d spread em for me.” - - So glad Zach hit him for this! Guess he won't be a Lady Bing candidate this year. LOL

That was some fight, and I think all of those things needed to be said. While I knew it was coming, the ending was still a great shock/surprise. VERY HOT!!!!! I hope Jenna doesn't freak when she comes back to earth.

Let Marc down easily. PLEASE!!!!!
PS: Glad we're gonna pay him back!

Loved this chapter !
I hope this means Sarah and Zach will get back together ... fingers crossed ! :)

loved the update!!!

I loved this Chapter i thought it was good..i think she needs to dumb Marc and try to work things out with Zach for sure..great update as always hun...cant wait for more!

I think Sarah's going in circles that's why she doesn't make any progress, something's keeping her from assessing the situation as it is and trying to make a "good" decision, whether pro or anti Zach...
Marc's not helping the situation by any means, but he's right to bring what Zach did up again, because to me it all boils down to whether Sarah can ever trust him again... it'S not question that they love each other a lot, they wouldn't be circling each other this much still if they didn't, but the problem with cheating is that it destroys the trust, the question is if she can deal with wondering where he'S going, what he's doing all the time... if she can deal with the agony of wondering what he's doing when he's even 5 minutes late or when he went out without her or when he doesn't call to say when he's coming home...

other than that a wonderful chapter ;) though I'm not quite happy DZ was the one with the potty mouth *pouts*

Zach definitely did the right thing by not taking advantage of her
hopefully this is a sign that things will be getting better between them soon
loved the update : )
please update soon : )

I think Sarah needs to go to counseling. She's been through so many things that have messed her up. Zach can't expect them to get back to normal when she needs to fix herself first.