Quiet Little Monsters - Comments

  • as dreamers do.

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    Ohmygoodness, this is hilarious xD Ahahah, you have a very witty writing style. I love it (:
    March 24th, 2010 at 03:20am
  • Dolls A Train Wreck

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    Cute :)
    I wonder what's going to happen next ! :D
    March 24th, 2010 at 02:49am
  • New Romantic.

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    "Uh. She's out at the doctor's. She, um, needed some medicine for her... hemorrhoids," Luella lied.
    this line totally reminded me of john green's an abundance of katherines when they were talking in french and lying to these kids and Colin's friend says he has tourettes and hemorrhiods because they are the same word in both languages.... sorry that was really long and you probably had no idea what the heck I was talking about but that totally made my night haha
    March 24th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • BryaNUH!

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    This is more amazing than I thought it would be!
    I feel as if I was watching a movie!
    March 24th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • New Romantic.

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    wowowowow! I love this, and its not the cliche I-Can-Read-Minds story I though it would be! ... not that I even know what a cliche mind reading story is but whatever. Not to mention your music quotes at the end of each chapter are awesome :]
    March 23rd, 2010 at 10:03pm
  • shimmerylight

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    I really thought that Finn was a mind reader too… but his dad I did not see that one coming!

    hmm, this is going to be interesting!^^
    March 23rd, 2010 at 11:23am
  • lazydancer

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    Okay, um, can I just tell you that I lllloooovvvveeeee this?
    Seriously, every time you start a story I think "Oh, this one is my favorite. Yes. It will always be my favorite." And then you start another one and I'm like, "NO! this one is my favorite. HANDS DOWN."
    You honestly do not know what you do to me Joyce.
    March 23rd, 2010 at 07:20am
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Ohhhh my. I'm super excited. I do love this kind of story. You're awesome! :D
    March 23rd, 2010 at 04:08am
  • avant-garde.

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    oh... and San Fran ftw. (booyah, my hometown baby!)
    March 23rd, 2010 at 02:24am
  • avant-garde.

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    subscribing.
    so captivating.. i love it.
    keep it up!
    March 23rd, 2010 at 02:23am
  • lookitsaBOW!

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    I just have to say, I've been listening to different versions (okay, Louis Armstrong and Zooey Deschanel's versions) of "Hello Dolly" for a week straight, and reading Dolly's name BLEW MY MIND.

    But that's beside the point. It's a very promising start to a story, and I"m definitely intrigued!
    March 23rd, 2010 at 01:52am
  • as dreamers do.

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    Ooo laa laaa, I likey (:
    Ahh-to-the-mazing, ;) I think I'm in love <3 Can't wait for more :D
    March 23rd, 2010 at 01:29am
  • Dolls A Train Wreck

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    Its different I love it :)
    March 23rd, 2010 at 01:24am
  • break.my.bones

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    THEY ARE MEANT TO BEEE TOGETHERRRRR
    March 23rd, 2010 at 12:41am
  • xx.coolio.xx

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    I love this new story. It's like melding how you used to write with a new type of writing. I still love your old stories, they were just so different (in an awesome good way) than all the other mibba stories
    March 22nd, 2010 at 11:35pm
  • fragile

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    Ok first, the Maccabees, YES.
    I love that line.
    And second, this was a beautiful update.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • Maisweetlove

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    I love this! :) enough said. :)
    March 22nd, 2010 at 06:29pm
  • break.my.bones

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    He was a polite serial killer.
    Hahaha I love Dolly!!

    And WHAT THE FUCK how did Finn know??
    March 22nd, 2010 at 05:29pm
  • shimmerylight

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    wow and I mean wow!!

    I am so psyched about this story! the idea is brilliant and you writing it makes it even more amazing! you have to update like NOW!!
    March 22nd, 2010 at 12:47pm
  • break.my.bones

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    Oh my god this is so cool! I'm going to love this story, I can tell. All the stories you've written don't have any magic/science fiction/whatever so I'm excited to see where this goes :) It's going to be so interesting and I'm sure you'll be able to explore this mind-reading idea beautifully
    March 22nd, 2010 at 02:43am