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  • MillieBees

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    I generally find it hard to comment on stories because I find this site full of silly little stories and such. This most definitely is not one of those this is a master piece. I can't really believe how awesome this is. In all honesty the world you created is so brilliant I think you should try someday to get this published this kinda thing is so popular right now with The Hunger Games Trilogy and others. I really love this keep it up. I believe in you!
    May 26th, 2011 at 08:27am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    Riley's coming back!!!!! WOO HOO!!! :D update soon!!!!!!!
    May 26th, 2011 at 05:12am
  • dreamer4life247

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    I really have to congratulate you. You said you would work on your spelling corrections and you did great with this chapter! I always look forward to these updates! So again thank you. And no matter what I'm still gonna cheer for Demitri Hehe I loved the part where he tried to comfort her but I just wish she would want it! haha can't wait for more
    May 25th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • amaranthine.

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    This is fantastic! I've only read the first chapter so far but I'm hooked, and I'll be sure to carry on reading soon when I have a bit more time. :) I love dystopian books and I also love pretty much anything about resistance groups, so this is already perfect for me, and it's so intriguing and well written. Thanks for posting this :)
    May 25th, 2011 at 08:27pm
  • gemima spatchelor

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    I can't wait for more of this story! its got me hooked, and so well written!
    May 20th, 2011 at 12:27am
  • kissmyoops

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    Oh. You. Stink. With. That. Cliff. Hanger. Grr. See. Now. I. Am. Talking. Like. This. Because. I'm. Dying. To. Know. What. Will. Happen. Next.
    May 19th, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • kissmyoops

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    It's so late and I have to get up in four hours, but this story has me hooked. I'm in love. Any chapter that involves Billy, Dimitri, or Riley (Mostly him ;D) is a good chapter. This story is morbidly amazing (oxymoron, much?) I'm in love.
    Legit. I think I feel in love with this story.
    May 14th, 2011 at 05:55am
  • mentirosa.

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    I honestly think that this is the best original fiction story I've read on here in a while. Lately I've been getting into post-apocalyptic stories, so this just fueled my hunger for more. :)
    Can't wait for you to update again.
    May 14th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    I miss Riley :(
    May 12th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • dreamer4life247

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    THIS IS SOOOO FREKIN AMAZING!!!!! Oh my goodness this is so good and so addicting! I love this story line and everything about it! Your a great writer and i cant wait for more! I haven't seen a story like this here and I think this is a great idea and so creative. I started reading and I just couldn't stop! I get annoyed sometimes because the spelling is sometimes wrong for allot of things but other than that its AWESOME and thank you for writing this! I really love the protectiveness of all the guys of her. And I think Riley and her are nice and all but Im still really rooting for Demitri for some reason. I just loved the part where she talks about them sharing a bed together and their feet touching SO CUTE! I love everything about this and I cant wait for more! This is Amazing.

    PS-Im really hoping for some more cute Demitri moments..hehe..(I love all the boy drama)
    May 11th, 2011 at 02:34am
  • lil'taquito

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    WOW. WOWOWOWOW!
    I love the characters, they all seem so real. And i love the whole storyline, too. BUTTT what i Love most of all is how strong you make Grace. Usually stories with a heroine end with her becoming weak and helpless, but Grace actually seems to be a truly strong person.
    So...yep, please update!
    May 11th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • April Showers

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    Holey Moley Guacamole this is amazing!!! You've got me hanging off of every word! I'm addicted!
    I can't believe this . . . wow. So much to process . . . I hope she'll get to see Riley again though!
    <3
    April 25th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Monica Beth

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    What I meant to say is do you update once ever month? If so may better come fast! xD
    April 24th, 2011 at 03:38pm
  • Monica Beth

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    Intense chapter. Do you update
    April 24th, 2011 at 03:37pm
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    Okay so I just found this story yesterday and read it all in one sitting! It is amazing :) no joke you could publish this someday. I mean alot of the really good stories on mibba are all fan fictions so they can't ever be published but this is really good!!!! Update soon!
    April 23rd, 2011 at 07:41pm
  • Monica Beth

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    You update every once in a while, I love this story! Keep up the good work :)
    April 16th, 2011 at 12:07am
  • BlondeMilf

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    I really love this story. I am happy you updated.
    April 15th, 2011 at 05:37pm
  • TheOriginalSinner

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    I stayed up so long to read this story, I couldn't force myself to stop. I love how believable it is, there's a good plot to it, and it's not just about one relationship.
    March 25th, 2011 at 10:53am
  • TotalNightmare

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    Just finished reading this and WoOw!! Seriously, I have no idea how you did it, but you've managed to make the story very believable and I have to give you major props for that!!
    I really love that the story has a real plot and that it's not just about Grace and Riley and their relationship, it makes the whole thing more real.

    Chapter 15 was a "HOLY SHIT" kind of moment for me!! I couldn't believe that he was the the father:o
    Chapter 21, when Riley was walking her back to the hideout, and he held her hand the whole time - I don't know why, cause holding hands isn't really a big deal, but for whatever reason, it made me go "Awwww" it was soo cute:p
    And then this last chapter.... I had tears in my eyes!! And I don't think that's happened to me, reading a story on mibba before. I just love the relationship between Grace and her dad.
    And I'm gonna stop there because this is the longest comment I've EVER made!:p haha
    Please update soon:))
    March 24th, 2011 at 09:50pm
  • TotalNightmare

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    Okay so I just read the first chapter and I fucking LOVE this!!!!!!!!! I've searched long for a well written concept like this, and now that I've found it, believe you me, I'm fucking ecstatic about it!!!
    I'm going to try and read this nice and slow, so I can enjoy it to the fullest:p
    March 13th, 2011 at 01:21pm