I generally find it hard to comment on stories because I find this site full of silly little stories and such. This most definitely is not one of those this is a master piece. I can't really believe how awesome this is. In all honesty the world you created is so brilliant I think you should try someday to get this published this kinda thing is so popular right now with The Hunger Games Trilogy and others. I really love this keep it up. I believe in you!
May 26th, 2011 at 08:27am