Restless Dreams - Comments

Very beautiful could use a few more quick action phrases to snap loudly in the readers face here and there but I liked it. Very descriptive.

This is amazing, and I'm not a big drabble fan.
This was so beautifully written, and so intense, it just kept me waiting, and wondering what would happen next, when she'd wake up.
This was just pure amazing.

This is the first thing I have written in over a year, so forgive me if it's not so great. haha. It took me forever to get this out, so I would love to hear what you think.