ONE VOTE FOR KISS! I need two more people :3 Oh, yes.
Alexander is, like I said, the most kind, gentle and...I suppose hot person I've ever written. And because you've helped me make that better, you can...borrow him for an hour. @_@ Choose your time wisely.
Hey Luna-kun! This chapter was marvelous, my dear. You keep improving ;D I love how Alexander is potrayed and acting, and the details are very nice. I'm imagining this very dreamlike place that all the characters are staying, slightly like in the Alice in Wonderland world, only without the freaky stuff haha. Do keep going! I want to see how it ends ;D >.>
Alright, I have to admit something. I thought Henry was sorta cute in this chapter. I guess he really does love Kanon. But I still like Alexander...I loved the chapter itself, as always it was beautifully written, and there was a line I liked in particular.
It was all…darkness. Like he had a shadow protecting his identity.--The bolded part was the simile I liked. That's a good way to put it. Good job Luna-keep updating.
omigosh. i love this story! it always takes me a while to get into a story, but urs didnt take long at all :) i like it because its completely new and different. all i ever read about now is about Fan-fics and bands and singers and famous people that everyone knows (not that fan-fics are bad, but u kno wut i'm saying). This is one of the best stories that i've read on mibba! i love Alexander. he's a sweetheart <3 i dont really like Henry so much, but then again, he IS spoiled....i dont like spoiled people too much tho...my brother is a spoiled brat....ANYWAY, i totally think u should put up a characters page. i took one of those tests that said i'm a visual learner, hence i need pictures..lol. i hope my comment helped, and i'm totally gonna subscribe cuz i love this story <3 i wouldnt change anything about it, and there were hardly any mistakes :) simply marvelous.
Thank you guys so much for your support! I really appreciate it! I'll probably be posting the next chapter this weekend, or if I get a sneaky idea and use the computer to go to Mibba in secret, then....I might be able to do it before that, however, I'm not sure.
I'm loving Alexander. Kanon is so innocent it's very cute. I'm glad Alexander took her to his place-but then she went back! And William slapped her. So much drama-I'm loving it.
"Of course, you're right. Your life has no meaning, and it doesn't matter if you do die. I'm..."-he caressed her face, closing in, closer and closer to her, inches from giving her a kiss-"...so glad you understand that, my little doll." Before she dared herself to protest, his lips were on hers. He pulled her closer, making their untruthful kiss even more intense.
William is Nuts, and obsessed with her. He's so...cruel. Psycho. But I like this part very much-I like it when there is something strange in a story. No, I Love it. I'm loving Alexander. {I'm aware that I said that already-but he's so kind to Kanon!}
Fine fine *takes him for an hour*