Beneath the Midnight Moon - Comments

Please update this soon

This is amazing, and i hope that you could update soon. :D

oh god i really love this story a lot and i hope you update soon :D

I love this story so much.
I hope you update soon.

So, I saw this was updated.

I think I died.

Just a little bit, though.

i missed this.

Oh, hello.
I really loved how funny and just. Cute this one was.
Like, who knew Casper has it in him to not be a brooding
ass? I love him when he's being sweet like that :3
And Oliver. Oh god don't even get me started on him.
He's such a pansy. SUCH a pansy. I adore him.
I just want them to love each other right now.
Even though it'll be forever before I have another update to read ;)

So uhm. Love love love love and I can't wait until there is more! <3

the last line?
yeah...
i melted.

Thank you for this!
I want more now....
:)

.... D< Update. I want to know what happens now.

duuuuude this is seriously...aammaazziinnggg

This story makes me smile lots (: update soon?

I just found this story, and I have to say I absolutely adore it.
Your writing is fantastic and I love the complex plot and characters, it's so different than a lot of other slashes.
I can't wait to read more :)

I love cashews.

I LOVE THIS! Its so cute in an odd way.
Update soon?

Looove it. Update soon. (:

Wow! I love this story! It's amazing! ;D
Update soon, I want to read more.

Best. New Years Gift. Ever.
i hope next time he doesn't pull away though
but he kind of did have the right to be mad

I'm an expert at bribery, yes I am.
Can I top the My Chem tickets for your birthday?
Doubt it. Oh well.

Kay, here goes:

Poor Oliver. Haha, that's pretty much my entire sympathy towards him at the moment.
He's so impossibly helpless when it comes to fending for himself and other general things
that come with being forced to live in the outdoors. Silly little city boy.

The beginning of the chapter was really sad, I think.
Not only is Oliver lost in his whole Casper way of thinking,
he's just generally stuck in a world of "What the fuck."
(As we giggled about many a time while you were writing this.)

Haha, and then Casper's just gone.
While I knew it was going to happen, I can't help but be a little miffed with him.
Even though I know it was necessary for the sake of the story, and it was clearly a Casper thing
to do, I still don't like it. :l haha, and only for selfish fangirl reason. We can ignore them though.

Aww, and then Oliver just curling into Casper's bed was just adorable.
And him pretty much growing a pair and telling Storm to fuck off. Hahaha.
That silly wolf... But I'm glad Oliver could find a little comfort in the situation.
He's still crippled too! D:

Ahh, and this is where the fun starts.
Now he's hungry and he has to test his ability to fend for himself.
And he's not going to have it all handed to him. Baha.
I think all of this living on the island is really good for Oliver.
Y'know, minus the whole delicious Man of Mystery who has shown up and is determined to steal
his adorable little innocence. (lol)
But, it's kind of teaching him to be a man? Oliver is such a pansy it's ridiculous.
(In a good way, of course)
Yeah, it's adorable watching him trying to find food..haha.
And then the fucking cashews. Hahaha.
Those things are fucking gross.
And now his hands are all puffy and useless. AHA.

Aww, and then there's just a little replay of the beginning of the chapter only Oliver's a bit more pathetic now because his HANDS are crippled too. Hahahaha... I get a kick out of the misfortune of others, and that's really terrible of me.

Gah, and then Storm brought him food. (:
It's like Storm is slowly become more accepting of the fact that Oliver is probably a little permanent, and eating him just isn't going to fly with Casper. Hah. And then Oliver figuring out how to clean and gut a rabbit. I'm sure that would of been hilarious to watch. (Not that I could do any better)
OH GOD, HE HAD TO BREAK IT'S BACK. D: POOR BUNNY.

awwwwwwwwww <3
That last scene was absolutely adorable.
And I think you're right.
I was still expecting Casper to just be like
"Hey, get out of my bed."
But he didn't and just ahh c:

And now Oliver's going to throw a little hissy fit.
And I will giggle a lot. (:

I think I'm done.
I still love you,
even though I was put through unnecessary torture.
Do it again, I'll murder you.
KTHANKS.

The style in which you write is amazing, as is the entire plot of the story :) I love how mysterious Casper is, and Oliver's just sweet :] (may I say, good name choice for him!)
I'm looking forward very much to the next update :)