This is such a beautiful story. (: I love it so much, really. I'm so glad I found it! Your writing style is just lovely, and I'm looking forward to reading more soon. (:
"With a roar of anger, Casper punched the face of the cliff, and retreated to his lion’s den without a single glance back." I STILL THINK IT SAYS HE PUNCHED OLIVER OFF THE CLIFF.
oh my goodness this story is beautiful and... amazng and i wish you had pictures of them thou. but its ok i love the story anyways. I can't wait till i read more and wooooo i was wanting for caspe to kiss oliver!
Okay, I want to say, this was amazing. And probably the best birthday present I got this year. <3 Really, you have no idea how much this means to me. But I'm going to try for detailed, but alas, I am tired and I still need to use the internet to achieve 'higher learning' in History.
As always, I love your description of everything. I can almost feel Casper and (Jesus Christ, I almost said Parker -.-) OLIVER around me, but in a less, stalker, I'm ruining their special moment, kind of way. And gah, we talked about that special place for DAYS. And you captured it so perfectly, it took my breath away. This was my favorite: "It possibly the grandest thing Oliver had ever laid eyes on. It was more powerful than the empire state building, more beautiful than a Mediterranean beach, and even more mysterious than the ghost man that stood before him." Beautiful, love.
And :] awh. kissy face. Now that you've gone that far, you have to keep going. Take some time out of your busy schedule and tell your friends to fuck off for like, ten minutes each day. (: It'll all work out. This is too good to get washed up with the incompletes in your computer, missy.
This is by far the best story written on mibba. Slash, original and fanfiction, this one beats them all. As much as i love anything that Palliser writes, this story owns anything of his. Please don't leace this, it's truly amazing and I hope you update soon. I'm already so in love with Casper and Oliver. Plus, the plot is so unique. Please please please don't stop writing this.
Only just found this story, and I must say it's already become a favorite of mine on mibba. The whole idea is just so unique, I haven't found anything even similar to this. All your detail adds so much to the story ( as if the plot wasn't amazing on it's own haha). The pace is also great, not rushing into everything. Anyways; I'm very excited for your next update! c:
I love it so much, really.
I'm so glad I found it!
Your writing style is just lovely,
and I'm looking forward to reading more soon.
(: