Beneath the Midnight Moon - Comments

  • quelqu'un m'a dit

    quelqu'un m'a dit (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Aww! I hope he's okay!
    May 19th, 2010 at 02:43am
  • heyyouovertheir123

    heyyouovertheir123 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    Canada
    Fucking Gorgeous. Absolutely ecstatic for next update.
    May 19th, 2010 at 01:45am
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

    PaigeyPantsFTW (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Mmmm, take that Dick Daddy! Boat is on it's way to AWESOMENESS.
    Aha, I can't wait until the next chapter's up. something good's gotta be on its way (:
    This story is pretty close to my favorite at the moment.
    :D
    May 12th, 2010 at 03:37am
  • Miyral

    Miyral (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    'the liquid gold sunshine melting through the window panes' I love that image, it's stunning. This one of Jakob 'the smallest figure running from the waves like they were lava, his joyous peal of laughter riding the air' is just as fantastic. I'm not at all surprised that Jakob is the first to notice the boat. I love that Oliver called him 'little master'. Can't wait for the next chapter! <3
    May 12th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • quelqu'un m'a dit

    quelqu'un m'a dit (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Dun dun dun!
    Can someone survive out at sea for 2 days? I probably wouldn't be able to...
    Update soon please!
    May 12th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • Miyral

    Miyral (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    I really like the writing style you've chosen, it works really well for the story so far. I love the way he plays with Jakob and 'corrupts' him. Can't wait to see what happens when he takes the sailboat out. Hope to find out soon! <3
    May 10th, 2010 at 05:54pm
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

    PaigeyPantsFTW (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Aww, Jakob is possibly the most adorable fictional child I've ever read. :)
    This story is definitely going somewhere good. I can't wait for more. (:
    May 9th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

    PaigeyPantsFTW (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    (: I love this, a lot. More soon, yes?
    May 8th, 2010 at 07:49am
  • The Good Life

    The Good Life (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Canada
    I love love LOVE this story so far, even though it's only one chapter, i can just tell that it's going to be amazing...keep up the good work...<3333
    May 8th, 2010 at 06:10am
  • Miyral

    Miyral (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    This sounds really good. I love greek mythology. Though I don't know that much about Calypso, just the basics. Can't wait for more! <3

    (first commenter! =D)
    *subscribes*
    May 8th, 2010 at 12:44am