Gah! Dang Mibba didn't send me the emails when you updated! So I just read through like fifteen chapters! haha I still love it though, and I'm all the more addicted now(:
Wow, this story is amazing. I love the mix up between the two cultures and languages. Your writing I find is very fluent, and if I had written something this great, I wuld jump on the chance to publish it into a book.
I loved this chapter, they finally got to see each other again!! well...kinda....lol. but I REALLY hope these two characters have peace in the end. I hope they are able to havea life TOGETHER and happy...but I have a gut feeling that, that won't happen... *sighs* I really hope it does.....
I am lost of all words I could describe this story as, it's just that good. I've read published stories like these for school, but minus the romantic part. I didn't think I'd like this story very much until I read the first chapter. I really want to know if the man Oceane grew up with was really her father, also I want to know if her other brother is alive too.
I am extramly excited for your new chaper comming out tomorrow! Your story is extreamly good and VERY different from other stories here on mibbba. I LOVE your story and your description is very detailed which is very good. I absolutly adore how you have mixed in a love story into such a time period. In addition, its so clean and pure. Its wonderful. There is so much hope in this story, and sometimes all you can do is hope. THANK YOU!!!! And please continue writing. You have an art.
This is simply amazing. I've never been interested in stories like this. Set in very different parts of the world. (for me atleast.) I can't wait for more :)
The plot of this story is great. I admire you for putting effort into translating those languages. Are you fluent? You should also re-read and edit carefully, otherwise it is great.