To Live Her Life - Comments

This is an amazing story! I absolutely love it

Okay, these past two chapter are in serious need of a proof reading. Chapter ten had tense problems galore, although chapter eleven was better, it still had quite a few typos.

I guess I'm confused... Is the building falling down? And if so, why? I understand the gunshots... or are they gunshots? That's an epic last line, but the epic-ness is kinda lessened when I'm not quite understanding the danger... Eh.

Poor Oceane :( Outlawed by her own people for not really doing anything. I don't like Maine, I don't like him at all. This was a good chapter! :)

So Maine does have a flaw. Very short tempered. I feel very bad for Oceane now that her past was just brought up again. Youri needs to come back. Now she's all alone and probably won't be wanting to see Maine for a while. I still enjoy this story a lot and I did also notice your tone has changed but not drastically or even in a bad way. It's still a great story and I still love it.

Yea, I'm one of them lost ones. Okay, so I'm not sure, but this doesn't excite me like it used too.. I also think the writing itself is changing. It's got a different tone now... I don't know, eh...

Uhm... Surprisingly, I'm out of things to say!

This chapter was adorable. Youri and Oceane are really cute. I don't mind how long it may take to get out a chapter, it's worth the wait. Love this story. I'm really liking Maine so far. He's really helping them to communicate verbally now and that's nice even though they really grow a strong bond when they have to try hardto understand what the other is trying to say. I am excited to see where things go with the two of them.

I liked this chapter a lot, having them interact with each other. It was cute:D

Oh yay! I liked this chapter! It was really good :) I don't care how long it takes you to get them out as long as you don't stop writing it XD

Now Youri and Oceane have a way to understand one another. I like Maine a lot becauce he can translate for them. He seems really nice and obviously is mistreated. So far he seems like a good person and friend. Loved the update. I'm always left wanting more, which is rare for me. Usually stories are hard for me to find but I really like this one! Great job so far, you are an excellent writer.

Yay! I liked this chapter =] I really like Youri, not sure what to think of Maine yet... :)

The chapter lengths for the story are great. I love the details and the plot keeps me hooked and wanting to read more.

Amazing update. I feel so bad for Oceane. She can't tell Youri what's wrong becuase they can't understand her. I'm really wanting to read what's going to happen with the commander. Can't wait to read about their talk. Loved the chapter.

I really like this! Its really good! Much better than all those cliched vampire/werewolf/student-teacher/pregnant teenager stories. I've never actually read anything middle-east or like this ever and I almost stopped because I really don't like reading languages I don't understand... but I didn't! And I love this! I mean I'm not a huge fan of swearing but its not like every other word so I'm all good XD
LOVEEEE ITTT!!! haha Your a really good writer and I don't think your being too descriptive I don't think its slow either, just really well written!

Great emotions in this chapter, it was awesome^_^

The only "too" something this is, is Too Amazing! I love Youri and Oceane's interactions, they're great. I'm kinda anxious for this meeting with the commander... Ooh, What's gonna happen? I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

I think the length of the chapters is perfect. They never seem to let you down from shortness, they're just right. I love the details as well. It really helpd bring the reader into the story without overdoing it and boring the reader. This story is fantastic and amazingly written. It's one one my favorite stories on here and probaby the best original story I've read on here. I can't wait for more! Love it(:

Wow! This is by far the BEST story I have ever read on this site. I love the interactions between Youri and Oceané and the thoughts and feelings they have toward each other. I can't wait for the next part of the story to be posted.

I love this story; it's so different from anything I've ever read.. I love it. (:

this story is really awesome i love it

I wouldn't be able to tell if the translations are right or wrong because I don't speak Ukranian or really any other language fluently. But I really do love the touch it adds to the story. This is such a different story from so many I've read and it's very intriging and captivating. Loved the chapter. This story is very well written and I really enjoy reading!