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  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Well, Cass is a little lier, haha !
    May 3rd, 2010 at 09:48pm
  • aprilcpeace

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    Ok so I love Jules ... And nick of course. But I don't see how nick van go from being with cass to being with Jules. I just hope its not awkward, because I feel like it would be if this were actually happening in real life. Update again soon?
    May 3rd, 2010 at 05:57am
  • Wonderland;

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    Love Love Love this!
    OK plot- it seems like it's going to be really good, drama filled and twisted. my fave type of stories :)
    Characters..
    Julissa- love the name. I just wanna hug her and tell her i'll be her friend. haha. Her obsession with time is interesting and i love it. Her love for her sister is weird but so adorable at the same time. I just hope eventually she gets noticed!
    Nick- not shown much yet, but who cares I love him for being thoughtful.
    Cass- I'm not too sure about her yet. I'm a bit indecisive... I think i'm going to end up pitying her alot and have a tinge of hate for her also.
    I hate the mom, she's oblivious.
    I have a feeling if you bring in Joe I'll love him! haha
    ok i'm done, this is awesome. Definitely continue! :D
    .xoMar
    May 3rd, 2010 at 05:38am
  • hopeless love

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    You're stories blow me away every freaking time. I really like this one so far, especially all the references to time. It seems to be going somewhere interesting. And it's definitely not like something I've read before, which means I love it. Keep it up!
    :)
    May 3rd, 2010 at 05:35am
  • Quiet lights;;

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    Okay so I finally read it! YAY ME! Haha, and I actually like it! I was somewhat iffy about it, when i read the first chapter, but it is really growing on me.

    I like Jules, she reminds me of myself in someways. I don't thinks she is bitter, I think she just wishes that she wasn't so much invisible as she is now. I can see why she is the way she is though, with her mom showing no care or appreciation towards her, and knowing that the only person that actually acknowledges her in a room, is the person that she semi-hates? I really think that she would like to be noticed just the tiniest bit, not be pushed aside like a dirty broom, because her sister is in the room.

    As goes for Cass, she reminds me of that song by Ashley tisdale "acting out". I was listening to it, while reading chapter 3 and I was like "this totally fits her!" Haha; I think Zach is the bad boy in this story (just my opinion); he kind of reminds me of that type of person. but something about her makes me think that she hangs out with her sister out of pity; I don't know but I kinda get that when she is around Nick.

    Nick on the other hand, I think really likes Julissa rather than Cass; i mean I think in the begginning he did like Cass, but somehow in the middle he has a soft spot for her.

    Her mom on the other hand, rubs me the wrong way...kind of like Sheba in "Eyes Of Light". Her dad reminds me something like Rodney in "Broken Danger" too, except he has fatherly instincts; he just doesn't show it towards his middle child.

    Amazing Story Taylor, I apoligize for not commenting sooner, life has been pretty hectic lately. I will comment HN and EOL tomorrow. To tired to type. lol. UPDATE THIS SOON!
    May 3rd, 2010 at 04:28am
  • ch33rali101

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    this is amazing! i love the story line/plot!!
    May 3rd, 2010 at 12:18am
  • That1DSmile

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    cass has been staying up al night, thinkin about nick & zack, shes confuzzled ;p

    but uh..i wish for u too continue this :D:D:D:D::D

    when H&N end, maybe u will updatemore? idk..

    i jjust love this story!
    May 3rd, 2010 at 12:07am
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    What is with Cass?
    She seems really....off :/
    And her not picking Jess up after school to and hanging out with Zack instead.
    And what about her staying up all night to finish her speech and make it perfect?? That's a bunch of bs
    Gah I love Nick :D He is too sweet! He needs to be with someone else. Someone like... Julissa haha
    This story is getting good! Update soon please :)
    May 2nd, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • vidushirox

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    kay, so i really like Jules...a lot and i have to say that Cass, well, she is a mess for lack of a better word. How can she lie to both of them?! gah, despicable. and Nick is a sweetheart, like always. Um. i cant wait for more :D
    May 2nd, 2010 at 07:51pm
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    This is an amazing story :^)
    It reminds me of my older sister Kassi && myself :^)
    Can't wait to read more!
    Lots of love
    - Katherine
    May 2nd, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • until my last breath

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    Girl, this is amazing.I am addicted to all of your stories, and I am overflowing with jealousy!
    Well done, I'm super excited for this. :)
    May 2nd, 2010 at 07:13pm
  • glitter on the floor

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    Hmm, Cass with blood shot eyes.
    Sounds like...
    Anyways, can't wait for more :]
    May 2nd, 2010 at 06:49pm
  • shattered heart.;;

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    I love Jules's sarcasm, she's a pretty cool character, ha. And I love Nick in this, he's really sweet. (:
    You have another hit here! Update, I want to write more but I have to go somewhere, ha.

    -Mandy <33
    May 2nd, 2010 at 06:45pm
  • yacht16

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    Aw Nick <3 update soon :)
    May 2nd, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • Nessie101

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    LOVE IT :)
    May 2nd, 2010 at 04:39pm
  • thelastsongxX

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    love it !
    May 2nd, 2010 at 03:01pm
  • Pufferfish8D

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    I love julissa's sarcasm, reminds me of me :) hehe
    Cass keeps blowing her off, so I have no idea what to expect from her....
    Oh well, update please :)
    May 2nd, 2010 at 02:52pm
  • hopelesslife;;

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    i just KNOW that Cass was hanging out with Zack , maybe cheating .
    Definite yes .
    Its very obvious , and I want to see what happens when Casss tells the truth . I bet the Cass and Zack thing will get more serious and serious , that Nick and Cass break up . And as they do that , Nick and Julissa will get closer .
    ... i just realized i basically said everything in the summary . ): i wanted to act all smartyish ... haha .
    I wonder how Nick and Julissa will get closer . And how bad the Cass/Zack thing will get .
    oh well , we can just wait . (:
    Hope you update soon , luvvies !
    May 2nd, 2010 at 08:17am
  • portalian

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    Really like this story and its only two chapters in :) Can't wait for the story to unfold, its gonna be an interesting one :)
    Can't wait for an update
    May 1st, 2010 at 05:47pm
  • shattered heart.;;

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    I want to give some predictions but this story is such a mystery, I can't think of any xD I do think Cass is into Zack, and she'll probably end up cheating on Nick (seriously, who would do that?) but that's all I can think of. (:

    I can tell already this is going to be amazing, epic even, ha. 68 subscribers?? wow, that's incredible. You know this story is going to become popular with the fan base you have.

    Update soon! This is getting interesting.
    May 1st, 2010 at 11:09am