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  • tiriel

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    Its a great story but i really wish you would just finish h&n first so you can focus better to the others. and its kinda irritating waiting for 3 stories update at the same time... :P
    April 30th, 2010 at 09:03pm
  • That1DSmile

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    Cass totally digs zack ;]
    April 30th, 2010 at 07:33am
  • That1DSmile

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    im scared of ur status! :( NEW; Maybe
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    THIS IS AMAZING!

    Jules is A LOT like me, we have a lot in common ;p except I love sports and I do a lot of sports + I love talking. ;]
    April 30th, 2010 at 07:17am
  • ch33rali101

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    this seems to be heading into the section called AWSOMENESS!
    April 29th, 2010 at 11:11pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    : D
    April 29th, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • Pufferfish8D

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    <3 :)
    April 29th, 2010 at 12:51pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Wow lol can't wait for more
    April 29th, 2010 at 08:38am
  • Getlin

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    So, your birthday is in May? So is mine :) My b-day is on 21st. My dream for my next birthday (which would also be my 20th birthday, I'm sooooo old) is to publish a book :D I have actually talked to a few publishers and we'll see how it goes.
    But this story? Seems interesting. Nothing has happened yet. But I'm interested to see how Nick and Cass become closer, cause right now... as she said - they're acquitances. So, yeah :)
    Can't wait for an update!
    April 29th, 2010 at 08:18am
  • Janiyah04

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    Love the story!!
    please continue!?!?!
    April 29th, 2010 at 05:04am
  • Queen.Of.The.Dorks

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    I love this story! I think that Cass is going to do something with that zack guy cause i mean she had said that her FRIENDS brother told her about the college when really she should have said her BOYFRIENDS brother. I mean that probably sent the guy the wrong message. But great job!!!
    April 29th, 2010 at 04:48am
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    :)
    “Umm, yeah. I’m so sorry…”

    “Zack,” he mumbled, giving her a quick crooked smile. I watched curiously, trying not to be nosy.

    “Zack,” she smiled, slowly handing him his tablet before standing. He followed, smoothing out his wrinkled black shirt, wiping his hands on his baggy jeans. “I’m Cass.” She held out her hand and he shook it, cocking his head.

    “So howd’ya hear about this place? It isn’t exactly on the map.”

    “My friend’s brother,” she smiled. I didn’t know how to explain it exactly, but she seemed to quiver at the word friend, dropping the rightful boy before it. Maybe she just didn’t want to air her business to some creep.
    Okay why didn't she say BOYFRIEND?? I would have, even if it was to a stranger! I think I'll somewhat like Zack, mostly because Cass will be with him all the time and Nick will have to spend time with Julissa :)

    So I'm really liking this so far. As for plot predictions, I have no idea! I hope it's a good one though, but knowing you it probably is haha :D

    Update soon please :)
    April 29th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • DecodeMe16

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    I think that Cass will cheat on nick and when he is heart broken Julissa (spell check) will be there to comfort him..and fall in love..I THINK. lol good story so far :-)
    April 29th, 2010 at 04:29am
  • Imperfectly Perfect.

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    Love love love
    April 29th, 2010 at 04:09am
  • SeeUInTheDark;

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    UPDATE THIS!!!! :D
    <3
    April 29th, 2010 at 12:32am
  • coast of maine.

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    This Jules girl and her family is the epitome of me and my family. It's scary as hell. I'm really excited for this , though !(:
    April 29th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • tiriel

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    It just has some dark vibe to it. interesting.
    April 28th, 2010 at 10:51pm
  • ch33rali101

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    Really Really Really can't wait to see where this story goes!
    April 28th, 2010 at 10:27pm
  • cosmic kiss-

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    I love this idea, it's great so far. Updates would be magical. (:
    April 28th, 2010 at 03:40pm
  • hopelesslife;;

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    wow ! amazing .
    its great , and im not lying .
    I have some theories ( the obvious ones haha ) , but I dont want to explain it , mostly becus my spacebar is practically broken now . :l
    Im just saying , I could arlready tell this sotry is going to turn out great , just like all your other stories !
    please continue !
    Hope you update soon , luvvies !
    April 28th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • Beautiful Ending

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    This is already Amazing
    I kinda dont like Cass already but ill give her a chance :)
    I feel sorry for Jules :/
    I love it cant wait to see what u do with this story :)
    April 28th, 2010 at 02:26am