Its a great story but i really wish you would just finish h&n first so you can focus better to the others. and its kinda irritating waiting for 3 stories update at the same time... :P
So, your birthday is in May? So is mine :) My b-day is on 21st. My dream for my next birthday (which would also be my 20th birthday, I'm sooooo old) is to publish a book :D I have actually talked to a few publishers and we'll see how it goes. But this story? Seems interesting. Nothing has happened yet. But I'm interested to see how Nick and Cass become closer, cause right now... as she said - they're acquitances. So, yeah :) Can't wait for an update!
I love this story! I think that Cass is going to do something with that zack guy cause i mean she had said that her FRIENDS brother told her about the college when really she should have said her BOYFRIENDS brother. I mean that probably sent the guy the wrong message. But great job!!!
“Zack,” he mumbled, giving her a quick crooked smile. I watched curiously, trying not to be nosy.
“Zack,” she smiled, slowly handing him his tablet before standing. He followed, smoothing out his wrinkled black shirt, wiping his hands on his baggy jeans. “I’m Cass.” She held out her hand and he shook it, cocking his head.
“So howd’ya hear about this place? It isn’t exactly on the map.”
“My friend’s brother,” she smiled. I didn’t know how to explain it exactly, but she seemed to quiver at the word friend, dropping the rightful boy before it. Maybe she just didn’t want to air her business to some creep. Okay why didn't she say BOYFRIEND?? I would have, even if it was to a stranger! I think I'll somewhat like Zack, mostly because Cass will be with him all the time and Nick will have to spend time with Julissa :)
So I'm really liking this so far. As for plot predictions, I have no idea! I hope it's a good one though, but knowing you it probably is haha :D
I think that Cass will cheat on nick and when he is heart broken Julissa (spell check) will be there to comfort him..and fall in love..I THINK. lol good story so far :-)
wow ! amazing . its great , and im not lying . I have some theories ( the obvious ones haha ) , but I dont want to explain it , mostly becus my spacebar is practically broken now . :l Im just saying , I could arlready tell this sotry is going to turn out great , just like all your other stories ! please continue ! Hope you update soon , luvvies !
This is already Amazing I kinda dont like Cass already but ill give her a chance :) I feel sorry for Jules :/ I love it cant wait to see what u do with this story :)