i can honestly say this is the best gay story I've ever read on Mibba you're characters are so real and honest and sincere and have ticks and things that are human instead of the 2D people that are characters in other stories not as a diss to other writers on here but this is what you want your characters to be like you're just an amazing author & if i could send you my laptop to you, i would i love this story & can't wait til you update
Ah man, a computer virus? I'm having problems with my computer, it won't turn on or anything so I can only get on when I can get access to the internet sonewhere :( I hate computers sometimes.
So, I leave comments on this story a lot. And I'm pretty sure I've left quite a few since your last update. But, I mean, can you blame me? This is, like, the best story on Mibba. Jussssayin'. And sometimes I get random urges to read this story and every time I think of something I have to say. And so I just re-read this (for, like, the 25th time. Probably not even exaggerating.) and this time don't really have anything to say. Except that I'm sorry your computer has a virus. :( Mine had one a few weeks ago and it was horrible. If I could possibly live without mine I'd send it to you just so you can update. Haha But seriously, it sucks and I hope you get it fixed soon. Not even for selfish, I-really-want-this-story-to-update reasons, but for not-having-a-computer-in-general-sucks reasons. :/
I just read this whole thing. It's 3:25am and I have been rubbing my eyes to stay awake for the last hour. It was so worth it. This is amazing. I can't wait for the next update.
OHAI. :D I noticed you haven't updated in 21 days. This saddens me. But we all have our reasons. And I'm waiting oh so patiently. Well, as patient as a someone who acts like a crack-head most of the time can be. xD Anyways...Yeah, I have no way to end this without sounding weird... So BAI.
This is probably my favorite story on here. Every time you update I throw a party. Legit. Anyway, I hope you can update soon because I really look forward to it.
I am totally and completely in love with your story! Ms. Cheema is awesome, I'd love to have her as my English teacher. Abby is so fudging (not cussing in comments. lol) cute and adorable (especially cuz I'm talking about Abby), Jay is a funny sweetheart, Vivian is, well, I don't know. She is Vivian, and that's all you need to know! And Marcus is a firm softie with an open but closed mind and he needs to think outside the freaking box like he does around Jay (most of the time) and he's awesome cuz he let Jay steal his heart and now he's like addicted to Jay as if he needed him like nicotine. *big huge sigh* I love how you guys get every single detail of everything that matters, and that makes it all the more real and addicting like Marcus is addicted to Jay. We'll both go into withdrawal without [them]. I really hope you update soon cuz... Well, you should know why by now; I just told you! <3
I like how much Jay thinks of Marcus, like he thinks that Marcus is perfect. It's like they're becoming sort of dependent on one another, which is kind of sweet :) Unlike most stories on here, you make time for readers to get to know the characters in a way which makes them seem actually real.
I hope that makes sense. This is really a good story.
You accidentally posted that chapter twice. :/ BUT HOLY FUCK I LOVED IT!!! Oh my God you have NO fucking clue how happy I was to see this updated. I was supposed to be asleep 42 minutes ago. But this was just too important!!! This story makes me act like I'm on crack! And I love it!! Please please please never leave that long again. I will die. But I understand. I get stuck a lot too. But my stories suck compared to this and don't make anyone act like they're on crack. Like me. It's like my story drug. Oh my God I want to read it again but I have to sleeeeeep. That's what tomorrow's for. I'm such a freak. Pardon my weird and awkwardness. x) Ah! I love it! xox
Okay. I comment on this story way too much during the gaps of updates... But, but, but, this is important. It's been a month in one day since you've updated. I'm dying. A. Month. And. One. Day. Please update as soon as you can. :) I miss Jay and his crazy and fucked up little head. He is my world. (Hyperbole.) But I really do love him... :) xox