This story is really moving along smoothly, I have yet to see anything where I'm just like 'really, how cliche, unrealistic and stupid can you get' like I see with so many other stories on her. If you have the talent to create a story that can entertain me and not lose my interest within the first 10 chapters then you got a special story to me. This has been my favorite story on Mibba for so long. I'm in love and I'm glad you're back to updating and hope you continue!
this was great and i really dont have much to say because this story is so great and im feeling flabbergasted(???) or something because this chapter was amazing/sad/great and i could totally see myself reading this in a paperback just after leaving a chapters or coles or ordering it off amazon
Okay, I loved the beginning and I love Vivian, she's perf, BUT HIS PARENTS AND THE END!!! Still awesome on my birthday bUT OMG. I don't know how to feel. Besides the obvious 'omg this story is so perf I love it so much'. I dunno man, I dunno. I will be (im)patiently awaiting the next update. ;) xox
Ohhhh my god I was like shocked just completely shocked I can see the reasoning to why the parents would assume that and made that decision but just holy crow that was unexpected
That was just amazing! Really really loved this chapter :D. Seriously epic~ And me always being a sucker for the more or less angsty stuff and a bit of drama, I just loved the ending of it, with the big fight with parents and Jay coming to pick up Marcus in the end. Oh and I really like how Marcus' and Vivian's relationship's getting better and Vivian being so right about him and Jay. I just hope that parents kicking Marcus out won't ruin him and Viv getting along again Can't wait for the next chapter~
I'll admit it, I thought you had forgotten about mibba and jay and marcus and it did sadden me but then I got the email on my phone and was like whaaaaaat? Is it? Is it really? Ahhhhhhhh
Whoop whoop! I just read this whole thing in two days and its got meh pumpeded! I'm in love with Jay. MARCUS CAN'T HAVE HIM!!! So I'm really surprised that there's no comments since 2010, so yay for being the first one this year! Great story update sooon please.
Ahh *happy sigh* Now my mind can float around in bliss for a wile before the cravings for this story start up again. I'm so proud of Jay for making it through his first day of sobriety. That's the way to do it, one day at a time, and he's got Marcus and his family there for him. I love that Marcus is still a nerd even when he's drunk. It kind of bothers me that he had to get drunk before admitting that he loves Jay but at the same time I'm really happy that he said it too. I really hope this has broken through some of the barriers that have been holding in this relationship and creating all those doubt he has because he clearly cares for Jay. I love that Abby can be a picky eater but that she'll eat steak. I don't think I've ever seen a little kid that will eat steak but oddly enough it really fits her. I truly love reading about these guys and can't wait to be reading more! <3
Omg you're so perfect and I love you!! When I saw this updated, I literally died. For, like, a minute. I've missed Jay's crazy ass. And Marcus' drunk ramblings at the end were cute. :)
You have no idea how happy I was when I saw that this was updated. This is among my favourite stories, Just everythign about it is so great. The plot, the characters, everything. I can't wait until your next update.
Just letting you know, I'm still here. I don't want to leave a stupid amount of comments though 'cause I am waiting patiently and it makes me look kind of crazy if I did keep posting comments aha.