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  • comradesnarky

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    A little cheese never hurt if you don't do it all the time :)
    This was a lovely chapter. Glad I got you to write it, haha. I like the whole countdown bit. The little gestures after each number was a good idea.
    July 20th, 2010 at 03:16pm
  • user123

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    Omg this is soooo effin good! Lol please update SOON! :)
    July 20th, 2010 at 02:05pm
  • filthylittlesecret

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    I love this story and this chapter is a clear example of why =) Beautiful work.
    July 20th, 2010 at 01:49pm
  • deja.entendu

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    Can this mean that they'll finely be together?
    July 20th, 2010 at 01:36pm
  • Disa616

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    It's not cheesy! Love it
    July 20th, 2010 at 12:36pm
  • factory girl

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    i love this chapter
    July 20th, 2010 at 08:20am
  • Victorian Rose

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    Excellent update as always. It was adorable and made me giggle at how sweet it was. Looking forward to more soon.
    July 20th, 2010 at 08:03am
  • KMRuvalcaba

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    Loved it! lol. Such a cute ending to the chapter and def. making me eager for more lol.

    Kassandra
    July 20th, 2010 at 07:35am
  • Tenebris In Lux

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    Love the update! I'm sorry about the laptop, but I love how the story is going ..
    July 20th, 2010 at 07:04am
  • Zilla Zalo

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    his name was inspired from the inferno. i was reading it around the time i was devloping the chaeacters haha youre right
    July 10th, 2010 at 09:11pm
  • Fangs;

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    Lovely.
    ... Dante's such an asshole. (I don't know why the heck do I keep associating his name with Dante's Inferno).
    July 10th, 2010 at 01:05pm
  • amaya.-.

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    Awesome! :) I feel like the story's really starting now that she got rid of the asshole :P
    -Xx
    July 10th, 2010 at 12:10pm
  • Disa616

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    This was a great cahpter! :)
    Seeing as I have been there serveral new years eves it was even easier to imagine. Great job!
    July 10th, 2010 at 10:36am
  • endless.dark

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    I really loved this chapter, as well.
    I loved that she ran past the guards and then Mige saved her. Haha.
    I'm super excited for the next chapter.
    So, update soon please!
    <3
    July 10th, 2010 at 05:03am
  • LadyMorbid

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    Lurved it! That was so out of character for Hillie. She's such a rebel! :L Can't wait for more. (:
    July 10th, 2010 at 02:52am
  • wonderlust queen.

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    i was so going to comment on the other update this morning but i was late for work and had to rush lol so i love both of these, im so excited to see what happens next! :D
    July 10th, 2010 at 02:43am
  • Zilla Zalo

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    My HIM gigs have been interesting to say the least. I always end up hating on the little kids talking out of terms about Ville and his love life.
    July 10th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • comradesnarky

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    Rice Crispies! OmNom.
    July 10th, 2010 at 01:29am
  • comradesnarky

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    Very good chapter. A little inspiration from your own experience waiting in line to see HIM. Hm? lol.

    MIGE! I fucking love Mige! And I love that Hillie is starting to break out of her shell.
    July 10th, 2010 at 01:27am
  • LadyMorbid

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    I loved it! And loved the comment about Nosferatu! :L
    July 9th, 2010 at 02:52pm
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