Eden - Comments

Yay! Her backbone finally grew in :D

This is great, i really like this story. I'm sorry i haven't commented sooner. I like your writing very much and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter :)

I'm so glad she finally snapped at Dante. I don't like him.
I'm really enjoying this so far, keep it up! :)

I keep thinking of Stella and Stanley from "A Street Car Named Desire"
Even though they don't have a relationship like that...
Great story though!
Update soon <3

COOL STORY BRO, Ahh Sherlann...I will be writing love letters to you tomorrow and shoving rice crispies inside the envelope. US Custom are going to think it's anthrax.

AT LEAST GIVE HIM A FUCKING OWL!

Only read 3 chapters so far but want more! :)

It's good. I absolutely love it.

Go Hillie, Go Hillie, It's her birthday, she's getting some balls, Go Hillie, Go Go Go!
:)

My random bursts of insanity on these comments represent how I feel about your story. It's a good thing. Ya know...
Cause I can't keep saying, 'YOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER!' every god damn time. You know this already. I gotta jazz this shit up. Bow chicka chicka ooh!

:D more soon ? :)

good for Hillie!
damn straight. (:
i lurve thissss.
and i'm so gonna be subscribing to that sequel when it happens. :D
<3

read all of your chapters, and just wanted to say that I love this story.... :D

i just found this story and i love it so far.
i love how you portray Ville its sad she stopped painting
cant wait to see what happens please update again soon
:D

Great work! :) (you double posted though, so you might want to take one off :P)

Looking forward to the next one :)

-XOXO

I love the story so far and I'm sorry I haven't commented sooner. I'm the type to read stuff in the middle of the night and be too lazy to leave feedback. I can't want for more.

That last chapter wasn't up to the usual standards I'm sorry, the next few chapters shall be good to write though! So there will be longwinded descriptions again. The sequel just needs to be chatted out with the girl that helps me finalise my story lines and then I can start it properly. Please don't say sorry for not commenting ! You make me feel horrible haha.

LOVE YOU ALL, END OF SAY NO MORE.

This is so fantastic. :3
I'm so sorry I don't comment as much as I should! I just feel that I always say the same thing, you know? I haven't disliked anything so far!

I love this story. I hope that the next few ones are longer And have more info like they used to! :) I hope you upload more often and a longer! Pleeease! Lol
And I would love a sequel!

i love this.
i don't exactly know how to explain it because i'm dog tired but it's uh-mazing. i misspelled it for emphasis. you're an excellent writer.

i don't exactly know what to say lmao.
great job is appropriate, i suppose lol!
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