Sinners - Comments

Only a few words to explain what I felt :



<3

My comment for the previous chapter wasn't all that important. It was just me freaking out because I thought that was the last chapter and YOU JUST KILLED RYAN AND BRENDON! And then, there's another chapter. And MY MOST BELOVED ZACKY VENGEANCE IS IN IT? How can this story get any better? It has MCR, The Young Veins, Panic At The Disco and A7X all in one story? Wow!

I hope Ryan and Brendon isn't exactly dead. I hope they just faked their death so that when they go, Mikey won't go looking for them. Tell me that my guess is true. Please, tell me that. T_T And I have a feeling that the gang that Zacky's boyfriend was involved with had something to do with Ryan's gang? I'm just guessing.

I love this story so, so, so much! My life would be so empty if it's over. =__=

Mikey ;_;
But oooo, I'm liking the potential friend for Mikey. Him and Zacky would get along so well c:

Oh. My heart just died. It's so strange but yesterday I told my mom I was gay and today she told me I could never see my girlfriend Nancy again. She told my we are moving this summer and the next high school I'm at I can't tell anyone I'm gay. I'm going through a rough time. I know what it's like to love someone and have them taken from you. I can't picture my life with out Nancy. That's why I just cried reading all of that. Your story is the only thing that makes me happy in my world of hurt. Thank you.

OHMYGOD! I hate this (I love it, but it makes me so fucking sad).

I LOVE IT (but I hate how I was "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" keep going?

Ah fucking site crashes.
I'm think you already read my comment but, It was yelling at you for killing Mikey Bren and Ryan, then apologizing, cause Mikey was alive, but a thousand times more dramatic. Dammit Mibba...

I'm crying. That's all I can say.

So everyone is dead? I'm so confused. What's going on am I tripping?

Okay, OH MY GOD!
Just... OH MY GOD!
OKay I've been following this for awhile, I think it got to like chapter 18 or something and then I stopped reading, I cannot for the life of me remember why. But anyway, I just caught up and on chapter 29 I was sorta like, poor Ry-Ry *coddles him* and now I'm really not sure.
I don't like Ryan, I don't like Brendon... but at the same time I love them? I love the relationship Brendon has with Ryan. And I love how well Ryan treats Brendon. But Ryan terrifies me. Like legit, terrifies me. When I was reading the scene where he was about to kill Mikey I wasn't breathing and my fists were clenched in my shirt and my heart was racing. I honestly thought he was going to kill him. I was terrified. And that's some major kudos man, only once has a story terrified me like that-- and I read a lot of these kinda stories.
I don't much like Brendon cause he keeps fucking around with Ryan and Mikey. And I get that he loves them both, but it's not fair on either of them. I think Brendon and Mikey would make an amazing couple, but I also think Brendon and Ryan have the most perfect relationship. But I completely understand Brendon when he's talking to Mikey about how he's not afraid of Ryan. I get that, and I really do Brendon 'cause he's such a sweet kid. He's so bubbly and upbeat and those eyes *-*
Y'know I'm actually really scared for Mikey now, he can't leave anymore. He knows... so he can't. And I feel bad for Gee and Frank; that they can't be together. And I sorta really dislike Ryan for that, that he's got them all under his fucking thumb. I really dislike people who have bad power... if you know what I mean. Like in this part:
“Leave him be, Ryan,” I heard Jon sigh, shifting so I could see his face over Ryan’s right shoulder.
“Are you giving me orders, Jonathan?” Ryan bit, glancing to his right slightly.
Jon was silent for a moment, and he sighed in defeat before he finally said, “No, sir.”
Jon is a friend, he just... he's a friend... am I making any sense?
And sometimes I find Mikey to be a tiny bit annoying. But that's because he's still accepting everything and going through his first love and stuff.

Okay, looking back I'm realising this all sounds like a negative comment D: And I really didn't mean that at all! D: I'm actually in an odd way, praising you. Your characters have such depth... it's incredible. I honestly have to give you even more kudos because I have never come across a story that has characters like this. Usually in a story it's good guy--bad guy, not another thought and you like the good guy and hate the bad guy. But I just can't do that with your characters. Because while Ryan is 'the bad guy', he's also a good guy that I love dearly. And Brendon was the bad guy for not telling Mikey he was engaged but he's still... Brendon... does that make any sense?
With the dragon tattoos at first I kinda thought they were either a cult or a thug group... was a bit surprised to find out they were the Mafia. I kinda feel sorry for Brendon. He's basically Ryan's bitch.
But anyway, I am completely captivated by this story... If there weren't obvious problems with copyright I'd tell you to publish this. It's incredible, and I rarely say that about ANY story. Published or not.
Anyway, this is the longest comment I've ever written on a story so I'm not quite sure how to wrap this up xD?
Erm... bye?
P.S. I love the incorporation of P!ATD, MCR, and I'm assuming FOB and CS. And thank you for writing a fucking masterpiece! :) (I also apologise for the length of this...I kinda got... involved... if that makes sense xD)

If I ever catch you, I hope that god looks away... I fucking hate cliffhangers!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fucking amazing story!

forgot how good this story was, I should be making homework right now, but this is the first time in a month I could pospone it to read your story so I did, my teachers will hate me but at the moment I don't care. this is so good, the character changes so slightly, it feels so natural, and yeey, A7X appearance, love it

im glad the misic festival was awesome ( seething that you got to see Cadge the Elephant AND MCR) i will also delcste my mouth throuhgl taped and staples shut. Im kind o excited to meet His mother, only because In think she might become a favored character over the mikey/bden/ryro drama. I miss Franke and Jon .... where did they go, are they on a super secret mission to make it look like the Way brothers died in a explosive car fire so Mikey and Gerard never have to leave????? Maybe? Im icthing for more <3

Oh yay for you! Oi, that was just toooo much, so now Ryan's mom know all about everything! How's the Mikey angle with the liar to play itself out? There are so many questions! I was a bit late in reading this time but you are never far from my thoughts and that bed best be comfies! Thinkin bout moving to Shinjuku, whaddya think about that juicy lil possible fact, more like wanna but when you get so sick as your Ryan would say,'Forget about it!'

I seriously wanted to cry while reading this! You know that a story is well written when you feel the feelings that the characters do!! Poor, Mikey, I swear!!! He always gets the crappy end of the stick *shakes head* I think he and Brendon would be amazing together, no matter how cute Ryan and Brendon is :P!! I didn't see that coming, though!! Them being engaged X_X!!! OH MY GOSH!! You always leave me on the edge of my seat, I really can't wait to read more. I had to wait until the end of my trip to read this because I had wanted to comment on it!

AHHH okay AHHHHH!!!
You spoil us too much xP But three more chapters... I can't believe it.
I kind of absolutely love this story. Way too much.
But yeah... Ryan's mummy, eh? I'm psyched and terrified to meet her xD
Maybe I'll actually get a notification next time xD But yeah, so excited for it! :D <3

*After reading chapter 38*
"*table flip Meme* WTF BUT YES I WAS RIGHT KIND OF MAFIA!!!"
Also, is this: “You did quite a number on that Bishops face,” Ryan said, eyeing me so intently that I couldn’t look away. supposed to be an "I" instead of a "you"?

The story is almost over??? I can't believe what's happening. I feel for Mikey because me and Taylor broke up and I gave all of myself to her.. This looks like there isn't a happy ending for Mikey. ): I've been crying for the last two months now.. All I do is read stories.

You know what? Mikey really irritates me. He seriously does. -______-

I'm not really sure how to put it but he keeps blaming everyone about everything, acting like he's all innocent and perfect. Come on, Mikey! Get a grip. The world doesn't evolve around you.

“Yes it is!” I said. “You fooled me. You were always going to choose Ryan. You… What on earth is wrong with you?! You wish for someone normal and then agree to marry him. A murderer!”

This paragraph right here makes we want to turn into Ryan and just beat the hell out of him. Brendon agreed to marry Ryan because he loves him, you dumbhead! Yeah, I'm in a violent mood this morning. And it saddened me to feel that way because I love Mikey in real life. You know that you're an amazing writer when the readers feel such a strong attachment to the characters and that the characters seem alive. I wish I could write like you.

But, at the same time, I do feel sorry for Mikey but it's really nobody's fault. They're all caught up in this twisted love story, I guess.

And again, you leave me with the cliffhanger. Ah, well. I guess I just have to wait for the update. ^_^

Anyway, that Matt that comes to take Mikey and Brendon. Is it, Matt Sanders? It doesn't really matter who he is but I'm just curious.

ps: I really, really enjoy commenting on your stories. I really do. I don't comment on lots of stories because most of the time, I don't know what to write. But, your stories raise questions and emotions from within me and I just can't let them be without telling you what I feel.

Officially, you're my favorite author right now in mibba.

And sorry for the long-ass comment.

Yeah that makes sense now that you say that, but holy shit! What a cliffhanger!