Torn Fragility - Comments

Why should she not let Max find her? But another amazing update, as always.

I have to say I've got no idea why she makes herself look like Rose :/ Did I miss something? Anyway excellent update as always, looking forward to another :D

i have to admit, i'm only on chapter 5 but i'm loving it already! seriously, there aren't words for how good this is! i can't wait to continue reading this :)

I love your story, your a great writer better than most on here. can't wait for the next chapter

I just spent the last hour or two reading this story and I have to say, I love it. You are truly an extremely talented writer and you have a unique, thrilling plot line here. It never gets dull or predictable. And it doesn't seem as if you rush things either which I see a lot of writers tend to do. It goes at a good pace. I cannot wait to read more of this. It's one of my new favorite stories and I am ecstatic to have found it

I love your style or writing. Great chapter :]]

I love how I can see this as I'm reading, if that makes any sense...Tut tut, she always turns up when everything seems to be going well :/

I love the story, but just please promise to keep updating, hopefully sooner than later!!

Talia is a not-Rose! Didn't see that coming...
You scared me for a second there with the not ending :P Oh, poor max :(

I love this story!
It's trippy, and confusing, but well-written. And I like Max, to me, he's adorable. :)

Great update! I'm glad it's not the end of the story!
I really liked the ending of this chapter, when Rose see's Max running she just dismisses it and decides not to care. She was so different to the Rose in the beginning, as if the whole experience had changed who he was although, maybe not for the better. I felt really sad reading that. I've gotten really attached to her as a character! But I think the image of Max running was incredibly effective and Hannah holding him back. I'm probably reading into it to much, but it kind of seems as if her work isn't finished and he needs her to stay.
I love this story, easily one of the best I've ever read on here.

I like the Not-Max XD
Maybe it's because I just re-read Pride and Prejudice, but there's something about him that reminds me of Mr. Darcy.
I think one of the things I really enjoy about this story, are all the twists and turns (and not to mention the cliffhangers) Like I said before, it's a really well known story, but you've given it more substance and depth. I loved the way you described Rose's reaction to the faerie food especially when she complains about the Not-Max wearing a tux, that was very funny :D
Another fantastic update!

Long chapter to make up for the weeks you'll be away? But really this is such a good story :) I can't say I hold much sympathy for not-Max however :P

This is so good! I've been reading non stop for the past hour, PLEASE update soon? I absolutely love the fairy tale- esq way you write

Just read the last two chapters.........i'm confused can't wit for more :)

This is sooo cool! Really trippy, but cool. I do sense the Beauty and the Beast-yness and that makes it even cooler. :D Your writing style is something that is rarely seen on Mibba. It's professional yet casual. You have an exstensive vocabulary and the words you choose in this story are never awkward and out of place like more complex words can be. The imagery I get from this story is really great. The sights and smells are all very realistic. The only thing I suggest is that when you write about an action sequence or a so-called 'heart-felt moment', you should slow things down a little so the reader may feel what the main character is feeling and just specifically for action scenes I suggest slowing it down because they tend to get muddled and readers get lost. In the scene where Rose first has the 'dream' about not-Max and fell off the roof, I had to re-read it to actually get it. Other than that everything is hunky dory and I adore this story! :D

Yuss! Cyber hug :D
Rose must be so scared...and confused :0
I read this story really slowly because I like picking out the nifty little descriptions you write :)

Love it!

Excellent update once again.
I love the way you portrayed the other Max. He doesn't say anything that would really suggest he's dangerous. But the way you describe his grin as feral and illustrate the hidden meaning in his words, makes the reader instantly understand he's definitely not the ideal person to sit down to dinner with :D This story is getting really exciting, I haven't read anything this original in a long time, on or off Mibba. Most people would find it extremely difficult to give new life to such a well known fairytale, but you are doing so beautifully. You've got serious talent.

Please update again soon!

I'm scared for her :/ Suspense isn't cool :P

I'm addicted to this story!

It's so good, I love Rose so much as a character, she's so believable. Her emotions are so real, it's so easy to relate to her.
And Smith is so interesting....

I love this, please update soon!

XXX