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  • kiwi12

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    ahhh!!!
    the suspense!!!
    May 18th, 2010 at 04:16pm
  • kiwi12

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    Your so good at describing! I can really picture what the character is like.
    So far I absoulutley love this story!!!
    May 17th, 2010 at 04:05pm
  • Roisin

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    I really liked the starting, I've completly forgotten what it said but yeah....I liked it a lot =)
    May 17th, 2010 at 06:23am
  • biseuteu.

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    Wow you update pretty quick. I have only time to read the second chapter, I'll read the third later!

    "My name is Rose and I have no thorns to protect me."
    I really liked this ending; you described well how she is a fragile girl.
    May 16th, 2010 at 06:17pm
  • Roisin

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    Oh, I love how you write =)
    Subscribed =]
    May 16th, 2010 at 10:08am
  • biseuteu.

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    No offense but I got bored in the middle of the chapter, too much description going on. Nonetheless, I'm subscribing and I'll look forward to see how the story unfolds.
    May 15th, 2010 at 11:13pm
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