Torn Fragility - Comments

I love your story, it's amazing so far and I can't wait to see more, I hope you change your mind about having to have people respond to update, but I think I understand. You want your writing to be acknowledged, to know that people want to read it? Just a guess(please don't be angry because I said that). I want to read it. I want to know what happens and I'm waiting in suspense for you to update again.

I agree with pie_steala :D
Things have indeed become clear :) just like you said they would. I'm excited for a new update :D

It's dreamlike....i really like it i hope you finish it i really want to know what happens.

I'm loving and enjoying :D

Dude, I loved this. :)

I admit, there was a bit too much of descriptions but some people like that. And I can deal with it. They're not bad descriptions so it's pretty great either way. (Or maybe I just like to know everything about the story right away haha)

The boy is her age? Wow, I didn't expect that. It suddenly got a million times more interesting. :)

I figured I'd give your story a read since you so kindly read my stuff hehe. I've been wanting to for awhile (a friend of mine talks fondly about a certain Howl ;D) so when you mentioned it I didn't exactly have anything better to do.

I'm going to subscribe but I'll take my sweet time reading. I don't want to catch up just yet. ;)

PS: I love "My name is Rose but I have no torns to protect me." This was sheer brilliance.

I wondered if you'd done it yourself, it's very fitting :)
Keep those updates coming :D

I love your banner! It's perfect! This is getting better and better!
I can't waitt until the next update.
:D

I love updates :) It was a little confusing but I imagine it was like that thing in Harry Potter hahacorrect me if I'm wrong :) Update soon :D

Ok so I was able to get a computer :) I love this! I confess, it is a bit confusing but its so interesting!

I'm not too confused just yet :) Update as soon as you can though, I have a newly found addiction to this story :)

I'm so glad your updated!
I love this so much! I'm sure you did fantastic on your practicals! :D

Always the suspense!!!
You
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mastermind
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This is so excellent!

Finally a story on Mibba with a little bite!

Arg! That's so cruel, just leave me hanging :/
Study hard :P

Exams are so STUPID!!! I reallyyyy want to read this!
I'm acting like a child aren't I?
Ahh well! I can't wait!

Ahhh exams, that sucks :/ I especially loved that chapter, just how you described everything, and Smith smiling :)

How did I manage to miss three chapters? haha I love it still :) And I'm quite fond of those quotes at the top =]

I love it! I keep reading it over and over. This is GREAT!
: )

just subscribed cheeers :D i love the fairy tale and i'm excited to see your version and how it plays out! :D

CHAPTER 3

" I had a sudden immense liking for this woman and followed her over the threshold after formalities had been said and done. "
Since Hannah would probably stick around in the story for a while, I think it would have been better to express Rose's feelings toward her differently. I don't know... show it in her actions or whatnot?

" I had heard the rare sound of a young man crying. Sobbing his heart out. "
I'm sort of writing this comment out while I go, so right now I'm curious as to who this man is. I like men who aren't afraid to cry. Hope you explain his situation further on. :D

CHAPTER 4

Well, the suspense is rising! I don't really have any thoughts or guesses as to what is behind the door... But I'm looking forward to finding out.
Also... I think I'm gradually appreciating all the detail you incorporate. Feels like I'm more immersed in the story itself.