March 9th, 2016 at 05:43am
@ strigoi.
Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed my slaughter scene. I'm always re-reading it and telling myself, "Hmmm. Its not gruesome enough!" But you've assured me otherwise. :)
I removed the characters from the story edit and I assumed they wouldn't be on there anymore. I assumed wrong.
Avery was early Lillian until I realized that it wasn't a good name for the section of history I was writing in. XD
I'm gonna change that tonight.
:)
I want to point out if you intend on reading farther that it mellows out on the "monster" front until later in the story.
@ insufferable;
I am so happy you liked it.
All your questions are answered later on ;)
The layout id quite lovely and I really love the "border". The red just makes it seem so elegant. And the way the title looks make it seem sort of spooky.
Just from reading the summary, combined with the title and layout, I have a feeling that this is a vampire or werewolf story. We shall see. Onwards!
Chapter One.
Gah! Your eye for detail is supuerb. I've noticed this in most of your stories It makes me love you lol
And I knew it would be a vampire! But I'm so glad it's not the beautiful, "Look at me sparkle" vampires. I mean, I guess there isn't anything wrong with drop-dead gorgeous undead beings, but I miss Dracula and the heart of it all. I was a bit upset upon the arrival of Markus and Isabel. But they sound dashing and I like her spirit and his attitude.
I'm anxious to read more!