Take a Sad Song and Make It Better - Comments

  • n.oxious

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    hmmmm
    interesting list Xd
    though
    i cant say i agree with all of them
    ujmm
    hmm
    lets see
    i gues mines wud be
    1.Alex Gaskarth
    2.John Ohh
    3. Gerard Way
    4.Jack Barakat
    5.Andy Sixxx
    6.Caleb Turman
    7.Zac Efron
    8.Jonathon Cook
    9.Christofer Drew
    10.Mathew Flyziiiiik

    great chapter
    i think the huge hint is Jack's text
    nd its like
    some kind of
    secret codeeee :D
    January 28th, 2011 at 01:29am
  • username123456

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    This whole chapter made me look back at this story and see how far it's come and I just got so proud of this story and it's characters and all of you and I just love it all sooo much! Bailey's reflections were really powerful because in a weird way she's showing how Jade and her changed but also how their changes contrasted slightly. And Bailey's whole thing with Zack, idk what's going on, but I just love the idea of them together. They fit, you know? Like she was saying, Zack was there from the start when she was running and fell and started sobbing. And i just need to let you know that I absolutely LOVE how you defined the characters soooo well! Like you know the differences. I have trouble with that all the time but I love how different they all are yet similar and can all be great friends. The whole Alex thing at the end was really funny though, lol. Speaking of the end, I kinda sorta love and hate the way you guys ended the last two chapters. Jade's thinking about going back to Essex and Bailey's thinking about never leaving. It's just soo different and unexpected. I feel like that was kinda important but idk, maybe I'm looking too much into it.
    Either way, I love this story and can't wait for another update!
    January 28th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love the chapter <3
    January 27th, 2011 at 10:36pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love the chapter <3
    January 27th, 2011 at 10:36pm
  • Liar Liar

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    nice. i like it
    January 27th, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • Kelseylynnf

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    Emily....you said there is a huge hint in this chapter and now it's going to bug the crap out of me that I don't know what it is. I'm trying to figure it out, but it's not working to well...
    Please update soon Livvy!!! I need more. This story is so unbelievable.
    Oh and I love your list Emily :) But I would totally have to say Alexander William Gaskarth...no doubt.
    <3 Kelsey
    January 27th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • grisel

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    Amazing chapter!!! And nice list ;) But I personally love Jackson Rathbone though. Update soon!
    January 27th, 2011 at 08:13am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    I love this, and I think its kinda funny that Kennedy Brock is the only real band boy on your list, hahaha.
    <3
    January 27th, 2011 at 05:15am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    OMG...I'm like really afraid of what's going to happen.
    That chapter was amazing but kind of scary at the same time...i'm thinking something bad is going to happen.
    She can't be having doubts about her and Alex's relationship..they are perfect together.
    Ahhhh!! This story is just so freaking amazing.
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    btw, The Ballad of Mona Lisa has been on repeat for days now. OMG. It's SO AMAZING. I have it stuck in my head now actually haha.
    <3 Kelsey
    January 24th, 2011 at 02:52am
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Oh no, not again. I'm serious, if she's gonna try and leave again I'm gonna lock her up or something so she can't leave. How can she ave doubts about her and Alex, they're perfect!!! <3
    January 23rd, 2011 at 04:25pm
  • Choi Minho

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    Dang, I guess I should have read this earlier if you posted the wrong chapter...dang!!
    Anyway, if you make Jade run away to Essex I will personally come find you and....push you into a bed of flowers and stuffed animals. She can't leave because Alex was about to tell her that he loves her!!!! Grrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!

    Also, zack and Bailey need to tell everyone about their relationship....because it is too adorable for everyone to not know...
    January 23rd, 2011 at 08:46am
  • n.oxious

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    :O
    no
    no say in HELL r they going bak tah Essex AGAIN
    no way in HELLL
    groans
    y can't she jus be with Alex
    nd tell him she loves him
    I know he loves her
    ugh
    crap
    IM A PANIC FAN
    ND IM GONNA GO LISTEN TO THE SONG NOOOWWWW
    UODATE THIS LKE SOON
    January 23rd, 2011 at 01:52am
  • Liar Liar

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    this is great. update soon
    January 23rd, 2011 at 12:19am
  • username123456

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    Omg! It's been wayyyyy to damn long! I'm soooooo sorry! But I want to say that I love how far this story has come and I'm so sad to know that it's ending soon! It's amazing isn't it how things change so suddenly as they go on, in stories and in life? I always find it funny how life never goes as planned and when I plan stories, it usually never goes as planned either because I think of something better while I'm planning an imaginary life. Weird, i know, lol.
    Anyways! So, I'm in love with Alex and Jade! They're soooo adorable! And I just know that Alex was going to say he loved Jade but she ran away :( She cannot go back to Essex! Her desire to constantly run from everything is pissing me off. She can't just run and I want her to just open her eyes and see that Alex does love her and that her home really is Lutherville.
    And Bailey and Zack? I love them! They're so perfect even though they're not technically together. I'm so afraid though that Bailey's going to get hurt because I feel like she always needs something solid to hold onto. I'm sooo excited for this story though and I can't wait to see what happens next! You have no idea how excited I am for this and how sorry I am for taking so long to comment! Forgive me please and update soon!
    January 22nd, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    My friend and I were on the phone the other day, and the subject of stories on Mibba came up. She told me to check this out, and I'm really glad she did. I'm loving it. ::)
    January 22nd, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • grisel

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    nice chapter. Can't wait for the next update
    January 18th, 2011 at 02:33am
  • Liar Liar

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    awesome update soon please
    January 17th, 2011 at 08:11pm
  • n.oxious

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    ooolala
    Zack and Bailey getting down
    nice
    great chapter
    can't wait for moreeee
    January 17th, 2011 at 05:26pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Haha that was not obvious AT ALL! I don't think Rian will tell the rest though. Update soon please <3 <3 <3
    January 17th, 2011 at 04:23pm
  • Choi Minho

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    Amazing chapter as always and I can't wait until everyone else finds out about Bailey and Zack. They make such a cute couple :)
    Updates make me sme and a happy Sara means a happy world. hahahahaha.
    :)
    January 17th, 2011 at 04:34am