January 28th, 2011 at 01:29am
This whole chapter made me look back at this story and see how far it's come and I just got so proud of this story and it's characters and all of you and I just love it all sooo much! Bailey's reflections were really powerful because in a weird way she's showing how Jade and her changed but also how their changes contrasted slightly. And Bailey's whole thing with Zack, idk what's going on, but I just love the idea of them together. They fit, you know? Like she was saying, Zack was there from the start when she was running and fell and started sobbing. And i just need to let you know that I absolutely LOVE how you defined the characters soooo well! Like you know the differences. I have trouble with that all the time but I love how different they all are yet similar and can all be great friends. The whole Alex thing at the end was really funny though, lol. Speaking of the end, I kinda sorta love and hate the way you guys ended the last two chapters. Jade's thinking about going back to Essex and Bailey's thinking about never leaving. It's just soo different and unexpected. I feel like that was kinda important but idk, maybe I'm looking too much into it.
Either way, I love this story and can't wait for another update!
interesting list Xd
though
i cant say i agree with all of them
ujmm
hmm
lets see
i gues mines wud be
1.Alex Gaskarth
2.John Ohh
3. Gerard Way
4.Jack Barakat
5.Andy Sixxx
6.Caleb Turman
7.Zac Efron
8.Jonathon Cook
9.Christofer Drew
10.Mathew Flyziiiiik
great chapter
i think the huge hint is Jack's text
nd its like
some kind of
secret codeeee :D