Tour With Me - Comments

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WHATTT??! NOOOOOOOOOOO!
they can't break up :(
i sort of, kind of hate you right now.

anyway, update soon! :D

NOOO WHAT?!? they can't broke up :( why Natalie why!!?
She loves him, and she knows it! so why she did that? I hate this kind of drama! she's playing with Justins feelings, that makes me mad :I
I hope that Justin don't give up on her.

aside from that, it was a good chapter tho :P

can't wait for more :D

natalie makes me mad.
but I love this so update soon? (:

nooo she needs to stay with him! she loves him too much she just wont admit it! ugh cant wait for the sequel!

I hate you right now.
I'm crying kinda sorta.
Dammit.

WHAT?!?! no that can't happen!
i'm not going to lie i actually got tears in my eyes at the end...can't wait for more :)

Oh... yeah, I could definitely kill Allen too, and to think I actually wanted then to be friends again. Psh... he's an asshole! Anyways, yeah, update soon please! =) <3 <3 <3

AHHHHH!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! They can NOT break up, just NO! I could kill Nat for doing that, I really could, she is a RETARD!!! Stupid, stupid, stupid!!!! Anyways, update soon please, I love it!!!! =) <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

upsetting.
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Justin was really worried about her, first the 'heart break' and then this? Justin must be feeling like trash. Natalie needs to get things fixed, or to tell Justin she loves him, or whatever, but make him feel okay.

My second thought. I hate Allan more than anything! I want Justin to break his effin' face! :I Natalie has to tell Justin that Allan did that to her, so things can get more intense >:)

My conclusion. I'm so sad 'cause the story is ending :( I'm hoping that the next one will be as good as this one :)

This is sad! Just imagining Sabrina sad You know something is very very wrong. Ugh, I hate Allan at this point like really I do.

Ahhhh! Poor Justin :(
That's all i have to say haha
Update soon :)

Oh my gosh I CANT BELIEVE THAT SICK TWISTED MOTER FUCKER!
UGH! I'm going to kill Alan! I can't believe he did that to Nat!
Please tell me ur going to lett him suffer in the next chapter!
I've always hated him >:[

Any way, love it! update or i'll die :')

Fuck dude,Allan doesn't take rejection well.
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Ok I saw Allan being in love with Nat and everything but I never saw him getting like that! I really am I kinda speechless, in a good way. GAH! You just have to update so we know what the firetruck is going on! Love it!!!!

OMG ! that was freakin intense !!!! more pleaseee !

oh my god i hate you for ending the chapter like that

HOLY FRICKING HELL!
That bitch, what the fudge? Allan is the biggest bitch, arrghhh!
Good on Nat for fighting back.
Daaaamn Allan has temper issues! Hitting Nat, his supposed best friend and girl he is inlove with! Yet he can still hurt her, that is fricking abuse! I, no joke, had teary eyes. (that's the kind of effect your writing has on me LOL)
Bloody hell, Allan is screwed in the head! Ohmagosh. Arghh. Justin should beat the crap out of him, or kick him off the tour. Faaaark.

Poor Natalie, holy crap, faaq, that would be so painful. And the way you described how she felt when she broke Justin's heart and Allan's, I think that hers was also breaking, from the betrayal and guilt caused in one night. How is Justin going to react? .O.
I hope he understands and doesn't get all freaky-mad like Allan did.
I think when I say I really hate Allan with a passion, that many readers would agree, ROFL.
Oh my gosh, it was kinda expected, but unexpected, for Allan to do something like that :/
Ahhh, this chapter was maddening, both good and bad, haha.
Update soon *crosses fingers for a somewhat positive outcome*
:)
Sorry about my ranting haha. This hit me like a tonne of bricks ;P

and once again....ALAN has to ruin it everything, he's such a prick! how he could hurt Natalie THAT way! oh my...WHERE'S JUSTIN WHEN SHE NEEDS HIM!

good update btw ;)