California Girl's - Comments

Yay! This was a great update, and I hope Zack gets over himself, soon -- Annabelle seems cute =]

ooo I must be Zack time of the month ha!

i thought you had the ATL dvd weeks ago? oh well im glad you got it now your lucky you got a bonus disc all the more ATL all the more better.

Love it :)

Awhhh yeah that is kind of sad. But I can just tell this story is going to be amazing, seriously!
I love how it wasn't typical, like Zack didn't all of a sudden think she was amazing and want to get to know here and how Grayson had absolutely no interest in the guys, for the most part.

Now we wait to see when that happens ;]

awwww don't worry it makes me said as well. It's weird reading about Jack and Mallory is no where in sight! =( However, chapter 3 was great and can't wait to continue reading and finding out more. Zack doesn't seem to like her very much lol. And i LOL at the part when Jack clapped his hands together excitedly after Grayson took the IV out of his arm haha. I could totally see him doing something like that! I <3 him.

<3 Kelsey

Yay! Another update. So I'm guessing you're going to keep me on my toes like king of empty promises. By the way, maybe Mallory could make an appearance...just a suggestion or was that your way of hinting she might come out haha.

I'm seriously loving this!

Well now i know that they are sisters! yay haha. and i'm guessing the guy that was laughing was Zack and the one that fell off the board was Jack b/c i could totally see him doing something like that! although i don't picture him as the surfer type so i have no clue if that's right or not! lol =) Great chapter. Can't wait to read more! =)

<3 Kelsey

Well im guessing that the guy laughing was zack in all his bulging bicept glory. The one who fell was probably either jack or alex im guessing. And i was also confused as to how they were related but this chapter cleared it up thanks!

Gahhhh the more I read the more I wanna really know what's going on
:o
Maybe i'm just stupid and can't figure it out. Haha.

I'm guessing that the laughing guy was Zack....just a guess ;]

So I'm guessing Zack was the one laughing and the one that fell was probably Jack. Oh Zack and Jack! It rhymes. Anyways did I get it right?

Yeah a Zack story. Funny how I was like when is she going to update and then all of a sudden I get an email. Ha it's like you're reading my mind.

Well can't wait to see what happens.

By the way, I clearly understood the relation of Anabelle and Grayson, but everyone has their opinion.

One of them HAS to be Zack in all his glory. Hehe.

Lol.

Love it!

More when you can! xD

<3

Well, one of them is definitely Zack :D
Great update! I can't wait to find out the relationship between Annabelle and her!

See I commented!

Hahaha.

I don't like it at all so far...I LOVE IT! Hahaha.

Can't wait for more!

<3

LIKES.

LIKELIKELIKELIKE
But I have so many questionssss!

Wooooooooooooooo!
Like the others, I am confused. But I have no doubt at all that this will be an amazing story!
:]

YAY! Zack Story!!!
I'm also confused on how they are related!!
I'm guessing their sisters???

Yay! Well it looks like i'm stealing this stories virginity! lol =) I loved it..i'm just confused as to how they are related but i guess i'll find out later in the story haha

unless you just want to tell me yourself? =) haha no jk. well chapter 1 was really good and i'm looking foward to reading more! it seems like it's going to be a good story!

<3 Kelsey