California Girl's - Comments

awww she kissed him! ;D

That was CUTE. Seriously.
And the spontaneous little peck on the lips leaving Zack stunned (and probably wanting more ;]) was freakin' adorable.
I loved it.

And the room was so cute! Annabelle liked it :]

Ha I caught the Mallory this time. I guess your heart belongs to that character. I just laughed it off though. Mistakes are going to happen. I bet you read it over several times and fine new things that need to be fixed.

Anyways loving that she doesn't like pink like every little girl.

Oh boy she kissed him! jslfjsdl jfglksfjgeoijf Yeah that's exactly how I sounded when I read that part. Please tell me he's not going to freak and ignore Grayson for a while after that. Oh wait they're going to be awkward around each other the next chapter, and Grayson is going to go nuts trying to figure out what is going on in that boy's head. Why do I get the feeling that she will probably trying to figure out what is going on in that pretty head of his through out the story?

Well anyways, loving the story and can't wait until your next update. No pressure but I feel that getting a notification of an update to the story is like instant happiness. =]

this is a great story!!!
i love the way you set up the characters :)

Love it, love it!!!!!!!!
Please continue!
I'm so happy I got my wireless back so that i can read!!
It's been a long 4 days.

So sweet Zack and cute adorable Anabelle make an appearance in the same chapter. Ha I felt like the last sentence was directed to both relationships that Grayson seems to be worried about.

Aww he wanted to see her smile. That's cute.

Can't wait until the next update.

i like this!
*subscribes*
More soon! xD

Awh, I loved the board-flipping thing! I literally "aww'ed". xD
I don't wanna see asshole Zack, but if it's necessary then okay. Haha. I like this Zack.
He's sweet.
:]

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THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY EVAHHHH!!!

I'm glad their getting along better :)

awww yay! I'm glad Grayson and Annabelle are making some progress! =) And i am definitley going to read the oneshot in honor of Jack's b-day =)

btw, chapter 12 is up! =)

Well i loved this chapter as well! I'm very happy Zack helped her out and she got to know he wasn't an idiot. lol looking forward to more! =)

Yay! I loved this chapter so much!!
It's making me super excited for what's to come :D

I knew Jack would become besties with Anabelle. Guess Alex is a bonus. Aww poor Zack's broken heart. hehe when he had to wash everything off his chest. Oh the glorious abs, you know like this...http://twitpic.com/1xebjc :D

YAY Zack!
on and you wrote
the name Malory instead
of Grayson once
thought i would let you know....

Awh, Zack is such a hero. This is great :)

I love how on each chapter, SOMETHING is revealed. Like, you find out something new each chapter.
And yay! You said asshole Zack would be gone soon and he was!
Now he's like a little boy with his first crush ;]

Great chapter! I loved how Alex, Jack, Rian and Matt were all interacting with Annabelle! I could just picture it..cute! And there seems to be drama heating up with Zack. He needs to calm down!

Whoa uh, Zack is a jerk. For real....
xD
Calm down, asshole Zack.

This story is great! I love, love, love it! Update as often as possible. I'm so curious about what's going to happen!