California Girl's - Comments

Zack is kind of a douche.
but, can't really blame him : /.
Haha! yeah i loved how Vinny had to do like four horrible things in a row.

Yay and update! *does happy dance*
Boo he made her cry... *sniffle*
What will Zack do? *strokes imaginary beard*

Well running to the airport would be to dramatic and bit over down. Or he can not go when she's leaving and then once Grayson is in NY he takes the next flight and gets there just in time. Then again both of those have been done before. OOOOh I know you can totally put a twist like he doesn't go to NY at all and then she meets an old fling and he becomes her bestie and puts things with Zack in perspective. Yup uh huh. And then Zack spends days after Grayson comes back trying to get her to forgive him. Which of course she does immediately upon seeing him, but she doesn't tell him that. Soooo yeah.

Well until the next update.

SL, oh my. Favorite part when Rian rejects Alex...I cracked up at that. Vinny is a freaking champ. I don't think anyone has been able to finish those nasty shakes. And Jack always seemed to have this evil face when pulling the lever.

ohhh i think there should be a dramatic cliché were Zack runs to the airport and goes after her before she boards the plane and leaves for NY!

hahah i saw them on SL! Too funny!!!

ahh those silly bands are addicting! I have so many and my mom gets mad at me for spending so much money on them! hahaha but I have to have like every shape! ;D

More soon! xD

I'm really hoping Zack changes his ways and stops avoiding her.
Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Ugh I hate waiting for a chapter! Hahaha please update soon! I wanna see what happens between the two! And if zack pulls his head out of his ass.

moreee! oh goodness, Annabelle can be a bratty kid. I hope she matures. And Zack is being a fool.

Herro, Almost-Asshole-But-Not-Completely-On-Purpose-Asshole-Zack!
I know you're sad n' stuffs, but come ahnnnn.
Grayson cannot make the NY trip by herself.
Cannn't.
:]

Such a bitch, such a bitch!
That Paige girl.
She really should get over herself.
And go Zack for screaming, and Annabelle for attitude!!!!!

woah, you're an amazing writer!
I love this story mucho (:

Wow, that Paige chick is such a bitch!!!

Ha, Paige? I wanna punch her in the face.
I see now why asshole Zack comes out sometimes. And i'm sure after that we'll see it a lot more.
:0

Poor Zack!
I really can't wait to see how the trip to New York goes.

I'm glad Zack accepted Grayson's invitation to go with her =)
The part with Annabelle and Zack was adorable!
Paige is a bitch and she needs to go. No wonder Zack isn't opening up much. She trampled all over him! How sad. Zack doesn't deserve that =(
Update soon! =)

awe cute especially with Annabelle and Zack too cute!
oh and you write bitch well ha!!

ahhhh paige is a bitch!
awww zack!

awww that was so cute of Grayson and Zack to do for Annabelle! It seemed she really loved it =)

Yay!!!!! Update!!!!!!
I liked this one!!!!
I think I want more Jack and Alex wildness!!!!
This was cute though!
UPDATE AGAIN PLEASE!!!!!

So cute!
And they kissed and she liked it and he liked it and gahhhh!
I can't wait to hear more about Zack :D

I really can't wait to read more. I just want to knowlre about Zack's past and all.

soo cute! I like how bold Grayson is with Zack! <3 they're perfect