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  • the author

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    I never did the homework, but that's okay :D

    WOAH!,

    Did Bert hear Craig say he was gay?!!

    Oh, god, oh GOD!!!!
    update soon, don't make me nervous!
    December 26th, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • ZombieChild

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    oh good he's going to be ok
    December 26th, 2010 at 03:17pm
  • Alex Gaskarth

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    I'm addicted to this story, it's so amazing. I loved the chapter :)
    December 26th, 2010 at 01:10pm
  • understand

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    Merry day-after Christmas. I can't help but think that bert knew about William and Craig... Hmmm
    December 26th, 2010 at 12:31pm
  • cmelam

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    Lydia I'm glad you are installing these chapters so diligently. It's good to finally know what happened to Bert but now I want more information about the past too! I like how you have made readers want to know the entire story-from the relationship to family drama.
    December 26th, 2010 at 07:23am
  • Slash-a-holic

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    awwwwwwww............... im still sad that hes in de hospital.
    update again soon, i wanna know what goes DOWN with them!
    December 26th, 2010 at 06:17am
  • herpy berpy.

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    I love how the chapter started. It really set the mood of the whole chapter. The pissed-off, blandness that mostly Craig was thinking - or not thinking. Some authors aren't able to set the scene with the first sentence, but like always with this story, I never feel like I've been devoid of anything...it's always epic.
    December 26th, 2010 at 05:54am
  • the author

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    I HAVE HOMEWORK THAT I AM MEANT TO BE DoING, AND IT IS BEING NEGLECTED BECAUSE OF THIS STORY!!!!

    You can have the pleasure of explainign that to my teacher :)

    *subscribes*
    MOAR!
    December 16th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • ZombieChild

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    poor james...wait scratch that, poor jonathan
    it's horrible how stuff like that actually happens
    December 11th, 2010 at 05:07pm
  • understand

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    it appears that you like to update on days with events
    happy Indiana Day :]
    it makes me wish i lived in Indiana
    and then the next one is on Christmas Eve
    and i'm slightly feverish and that chapter still made sense to me
    so i'd count this one as a win

    p.s.
    i kind of love this story
    December 11th, 2010 at 03:13pm
  • Alex Gaskarth

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    That was amazing, but really sad at the same time :(
    I love this story so much.
    December 11th, 2010 at 01:32pm
  • herpy berpy.

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    Oh god. I'm such a horribly infrequent commenter.
    But I'm still here. And I'm still loving this story. I would just be repeating myself. But it's an amazing concept, this story is.
    December 11th, 2010 at 09:27am
  • Slash-a-holic

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    awww! That is soo sad! i think this chapter was really cool though!
    December 11th, 2010 at 07:24am
  • sparkstoash

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    I really liked that last chapter, how it was a flashback. It really cleared up a lot for me, and I'm sure for other readers also. That's so terrible that his brother died! Man, if that happened to one of my sisters, I would fucking die. By the way, when you said that my comment made your week, it immediately made my week:)
    December 11th, 2010 at 07:11am
  • BatCat!-SharkAttack!

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    omg!!!!! I LOVE YOU STORY!!
    oh no bert!!!!!!
    December 5th, 2010 at 07:16pm
  • sparkstoash

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    Ahhh. I am loving this story! I'm kinda scared to know what happened, but I want to know...
    December 4th, 2010 at 01:23am
  • Slash-a-holic

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    AHHH! NOOO!!!!! DONT DIE!!! ID HAVE TO COME AND RESSUCITATE YOU!!!!!!!
    AHHHH!
    December 1st, 2010 at 01:19am
  • understand

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    O.O
    **PAGE CLAIM!**
    November 29th, 2010 at 10:34pm
  • understand

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    happy cyber-monday.
    even though bert having a heart attack,
    or something of the sort,
    isn't all that happy
    November 29th, 2010 at 10:34pm
  • ZombieChild

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    nooo cliffhanger D:
    omg did he hear what craig said and that's what gave him the heart attack???
    I MUST KNOW update
    November 29th, 2010 at 09:53pm