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you are just amazing. and just so you know. i plan on commenting on every chapter! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I love how the chapters are so long!
Amazing. Thankyou so much for updating<3<3

who doesn't adore a good pwp scene every once in a while?

Amazing story <3
Probably going to be one of my favourites, and I'm really looking forward to the next update!
You're a very talented writer.

Ah man. I just realized, I've never really laughed out loud with stories...because there's never been anything remotely funny in them. But that chapter did make me laugh out loud.
Again, a great chapter. This is fast becoming one of my favorites (even though I think I've said that before, but it's good to repeat it, on this story at least).

wonderful! Im glad his dad's back! Wonderful!

i enjoy william.
much too much.
he just makes me smile :]

I definitely didn't catch any mistakes at all within this,
so good editing job!
You are a truly gifted writer, I think.
The sexual scene was beautifully written,
as well as all of the other chapters within this story.
I love your voice, and the lively characters.
I'm looking forward to the next update!
<3

Woah. That was an amazing chapter...not just 'cause of the sex scene either...but it was also an amazing sex scene. And I can't seem to use a better word than 'amazing'. It seems to be my word of the day. But it totally was. At first, I forgot what happened last chapter, then as I read further in, I remembered without having to re-read the chapter. That's really good writing.

this chapter is FANTASTIC! i read it and was like. WOAH, GRAPHIC!
im so glad my parents didnt walk in! that would be bad! Keep writing, it was great! and UPDATE SOON!

I thought this was a wonderfully/sad chapter! SUPER CUTE, cause i love william, and hes adorable. and its so sad that hes that heartbroken, but you can tell then that he loves craig ALL THAT MUCH! its amazing and i can't wait for those buggars at school lay off you so you can update again~

D:
well that made me cry
it was heartbreaking really :[

i kind of love this
...a lot
:]
i like how it's about life in general and not just Craig's relationship

Thank you for updating!
I really loved this chapter.
Poor Craig though.
I feel absolutely terrible for him.
I just hope that he never feels the need to distane himself from Will,
because of all of the stuff going on with his family and with school.
I thought the little part about him forgetting his birthday was funny,
and just so Craig, haha.
Anyways,
I really loved this chapter,
and I can't wait until the next update.
<3

Woah. This story never ceases to amaze me. It's one of those that are now few and far between where I actually feel the characters, rather than hazy blurs. I personally feel like I'm standing somewhere watching these things play out. It's so simple, but has an amazing effect.
This is also one of those few stories that if I have more than one update to read at a time, I leave it until last to read, because then I can go out on a bang, kind-of thing. 'Tis great.
And yes, I agree. New My Chem thing is great. Beyond that, actually...

How on earth aren't there more readers/commenters?
I find this to be simply amazing.
The descriptions and character developments are just lovely,
and I enjoy how well written this is.
Congratualatuions on creating such a wonderful story,
and I wil most definitely be looking out for more.

ooo i like this this is pretty awesome =]

this was a wonderful chapter! im so glad that you made this a story! i love them together as a couple, and they are supppper cute! i cannot wait to see what the next chapter brings!

COMMENT VIRGINITY! i love this story! Its great! it would be amazing if you continued!