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@ OnceUponAMoon
I just had to do it! I couldn’t be stopped lmao

@ animal soup
but also thank you, you are FAR too kind

@ animal soup
oh dear god what are you doing lisa ahhhhhh go read my stuff on AO3

this is still so fucking good omg <3

Read the whole thing in one sitting, couldn't pull myself away at all. I love how they actually feel like people instead of cliches and stereotypes. <3

addicted.

Mkay, this real comment is much over due.
And I'm sorry. :x

Mkay, well, I loved the beginning of this because they were both all
soft spoken and sort of mumbling everywhere, and for some reason
that was just adorable for me. And it sort of carried over from the
previous chapter with Will being all worried about Madison and
a;lksdjfa I just loved it. And then general cuddling?! Christ, I hadn't
noticed how much I missed their cuddle moments. They're so fucking
cute when they cuddle.

Ahahahaha, and I love how it's Craig and Will's dad who're moving
all of Will's heavy shit. Will is such a lazy shit, and it's hilarious
and jesus I love him so much. :3

oh my god.
Will's little brother interrogating Craig about loving his brother.
sd;lfkjadslfkasdf do you want me to go into cardiac arrest?!
Seriously, I could of died that little boy was being so cute.
I think I have a soft spot for little boys. (lol, pedo!)
but, like. they're so cute. Not that I think little girls aren't,
because that so isn't the case, (hello, My Chem is just crawling
with adorable little girls right now.) but just ASJDFALKF
I love little boys. I think this paragraph is a lost cause now
because it just sounds like I want to rape little kids, so I'm
gonna stop and move on.

Bravo with the little brother, it was adorable and I loved it.
and then Will being cute after. :3

Okayokayokay. Let me just tell you how much you scared me
when Will went to that party. Like, you already know my general
phobia of parties in general, but he left Craig, MAD, and then Craig was
up really late waiting for him and I was just like "Oh god, oh god, oh god,
he's going to get in a car accident or alcohol poisoning or he'll fall asleep on the
couch and someone will think it's funny to let him drown in a puddle of his
own vomit and then I'll never see his sweet face again and Craig will be sad
and I'll have to just give up on life all together." yeah. that was all that was
going through my entire head when that shit happened. But then you brought him
home, safe and sound, minus the whole being shitfaced and then throwing up
everywhere and Craig having to play mommy which was pretty cute
and then they went and helped Craig's parents and Will was just a sack of sick
and just :3333 I was just relieved Will wasn't dead or something. haha.
But Craig and Will were being all...not cute like normal while they were packing
and it made me sad ): but then Will came in and apologized and they
just fuck can I have one please? I'll feed him and everything.

BUT HOLY SHIT.
and then your fucking cliff hanger from hell, you COCK SUCKER.
Seriously. I need a sequel in the worst way, you're going to give me
blue balls by the time you get the sequel up and running. <3
and trust me, i'll be waiting ever so patiently because I want you to
know you always having at least one person waiting and stalking
until it's up. (:

I love you, and I loved this story to bits, and Christ I just can't wait.

...I really wish I had met you at My Chem -.-

and of course i will wait for the sequel

“What if he isn’t dead?”
THAT KILLED ME.
i had more to say but it all seems insignificant compared to that last sentence.
everything i know is a lie.

DFSEGHYIJKH cliffhanger! I can't believe it's over. I can't believe you left it like that! I'm really looking forward to the sequel now, this chapter was cute, but sad at the same time. This story is just perfect and my favourite and I'm pretty sure I've said it all before but it's still true. I'm going to miss this so much!

<3

I LOVE YOU!!!! YOU ARE AMAZING! Im so glad there's going to be a sequel!
this chapter was cute, and sad at the same time, with the drinking. i felt bad :/
but the "I love him with all my heart" was like, too cute! Love it! <3
you are an amazing writer, you write amazing stories that i cannot wait until the next update.
I LOVE YOU!

-I'm gonna leave another comment and actually cover everything that was great about this tomorrow. Because my brain is dead from the amount of mind fuckery in X-Men and good god do I love James McAvoy.-

you fucking bitch
oh my god. Cliff hanger?! On the last chapter?!
I'm going to HAVE to murder something now!
Gah. But oh my god. This was absolutely amazing.
But isn't it always? I seriously adore your style of writing,
And just. Shit. There were so many great things about this.
An honestly, you told me I was going to be upset and everytime
Something that could of led to something really awful happened, I freaked out.
Like, first I thought something bad was gonna happen to Will's sister. 'Cause Y'know.
And then the whole Will going out to that party, MAD AT CRAIG, and then Craig is worried
Until he gets home. I'm sure you know that I would of ended you if you hurt William.
Death would be brough upon your head.
And then, haha, Will wandering arous Craig's house having difficulties finding Craig made me think Craig was eaten by darkness or something. And I also would of had to strangle you.

BUT thank you for writing this story.
It really has been a great run, and I can't wait for you to get the sequel running.
Most of all, thank you for being my very best friend <3
I love you and I expect great things of you!

Oh, my, fucking, god!
Oh, lord. What a ending! Such an epic ending. I think I thought that Jonathon wasn't dead when I first read the chapter where James told Craig about him actually dying...like, I thought 'what if he's just done a runner?' sorta thing. But I never thought it would be true! Hahahaha. I am going to miss this story...but even though you said it'll be a while, I'll wait patiently - sit tight - for the sequel. It'll give me something to do in between all of these shakes (literally).

You left a cliffhanger?! How dare you?! Just kidding obviously.
I think you wrapped it up completely perfectly.
That part with the little brother and loving with your whole heart was so freaking adorable. Made me have quite the cheesy grin on my face.
Will was kind of different in this one but it's nice to see them kind of switch roles. Craig still held back his hair when he was sick and that's awwwww-esome. kind of surprised you wrote a vomit scene though.
Um it's kind of sad to see it end but I think you told a beautiful story and I loved to see it contined after the initial short story. So thanks and shit for writing it };D

in my April 24th, 2011 at 10:44pm comment
has should be as*

i still have two more weeks of school >.>
THERE WAS SO MUCH SNOW IN JANUARY.
but congratulations
i'm happy things are being resolved
at least until the sequel anyway
and then madison will get sick
and relationships will be strained.
fun stuff <3

**PAGECLAIM!**

Craig really tried to pissed at William but it was just so hard when he looked all pathetic and sweaty and in pain.

Later that night, William didn’t even try lay with Craig
small typos

Oh my god this is still so epically amazing,
can I just die already?
Every chapter is positively exquisite and wonderful,
and I love your style so much, and the way that you can
flip back and forth from POV's is brilliant.
I can't manage anything but first person, so I admire that,
SO FUCKING MUCH.
I can't believe this is almost over,
but there will be a sequel, YAY!
I adore this.

Also, Madison seems really interesting!
I loved the way you've characterized her already,
and I have a feeling her illness will become important...

<3