A City of Fools - Comments

I love chapter 3!! I thought it was so funny. gonna read chapter 4 now <3

chapter 4 was great!

I feel bad. I wasn't the first comment. =(
But hey, I'm on the first page, W00T!
Love the story, Hon. hehe. <3 <3

Love Always,
Kami

I like this :) Can't wait for the update and definitely subscribing. <3

I looovee this story(:
Can't wait for the next update(:

This is amazing... just putting it out there :)
I love the story line so far. More often than not in stories Alex is depicted as all roses and daisies... and there's nothing wrong with that, but I like how you portray him as an arrogant ass and like he knows something that everyone else doesn't... like he's keeping a secret and how he seems to have so many walls up and isn't willing to let anyone in :) haha, that's what I get from it anyway, and the mystery is like making me addicted to your updates haha.
Your characters are really easy to relate too as well, whether that's intentional or not.
And I loved Lisa's little speech at the bottom of the last chapter... foreshadowing I hope :)
Be sure to update soon
:)

I just found this story and I absolutely love it! For some reason when Eli and Lauren are together I think of me and my best friend. We bicker like that all the time and we barely pay attention to each other but we know that it's not intentional and we laugh it off. I just love this story and can't wait for another update!

i really like you story.
cant wait for another update.

Way to be a man-whore Alex

OOOOH ALEX GOT TOLD. i didn't think that was coming!(; Jack and Lauren are so cute. :DDDD hahaha. ;D i love this and youuuuu! <3

i love this story! =D
cant wait to read more

I Love Love Love this!!

IF OTHER PEOPLE DON'T START COMMENTING THIS AMAZING THING, I WILL GO CRAZY. IT'S SO GOOD and you already know i love it.(: Jack is too cute and you know i already told you about seeing Alex do everything he does, haha. :D

I love this story! It's good. It's different from other fan-fics, I like it. Update soon please <3

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! :D UPDATE SOON, LOVE! <3 Jack, hehehe.(:

FIRST COMMENT! muahaha!(: I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO POST YOUR FREAKING STORY...just so you know.