My Calamity - Comments

I always come back and re-read this story, and every time I never sieze to be amazed by how beautifully well put this story is. Is beautifully a word? I hope so.

Okay I've just finish the first chapter and I love it. But a heatstroke in Michigan? Try living during summers in oklahoma or Texas! Then we can talk about medical conditions induced by heat. But I love it and will probably stay up all night reading.

This story is actually beautiful. Spent all night reading, im not going to lie i dont really like open endings but the story was just amazing. Any way there might be a sequel or something. Life as seniors together or after college?

Really well written, but the ending was a little too abrupt for my liking. Nevertheless, you've created a wonderful masterpiece.

just reread this... still amazing :) it's also kinda helped me to think of what i want to write. i'm pretty sure my next story will be an original fiction. i had a fanfiction up here for the longest time but i took it down because i got bored with it. i'm glad there's stories like this to help me get an idea of how i want my next story to be :)

I adore this story, I must of read the whole thing half a dozen times. This is book worthy. I really hope you continue the story longer. It's the kind where you just don't want it to end. you're talented. :D

i know you completed this story like forever ago, but i just read it in like, two hours.
it is outstanding, but i'm sure you already know that, considering its popularity.
i love your writing, its so different than any of the many stories i've read on Mibba are written.
i envy your talent, but i still admire it. and i really hope you create a new story sometime, because i'm sure, whatever it is, it'll be great, and well-written. it could even be a ridiculous fan-fiction about a stupid Twilight character, and i'd still read it because you're an amazing writer. i loved this story, it was so simple, yet sufficient. and the title of it is right on and pretty far-out.
well, i'm gonna end this little novel here because i've pretty much said the same thing over and over again.

keep writing and as stay brilliant as you are, my friend.

This story is amazingly beautiful! I enjoyed every part even if I almost cried at certain parts. I would buy this if it was a book! :D

greqat story but why was it rated nc 17?. btw it was really good

This is adorable. More please!

This was a great story. I could really feel how in love your characters were. It was very well written and the ending was fantastic: it wasn't predictable, it was interesting, and it was ambiguous, so the reader can kind of decide on their own what happens to Penelope and Patrick in the future.
Great Job!

Love the story bro.

Oh Jordan. I love you, and I love this, and I am so sad that it's over but I'm so happy that I can sit here and reread it again and again. It's so beautiful. It shows me how talented you are - it shows us all that - and I've fallen so hard for Patch and Penelope is so lovely and her parents tell their own story through their daughter. Man I can't even put into words how beautiful this all is. I'm listening to Jackson Browne and am trying to get my head around how amazing you are while also trying to soak in the amazingness of this music. Oh look at me rambling. Bascially my love, you're a genius!
xox

Loved this story so much. Sad to see it end! Thanks for writing it :)

wow, so true
because it's true, we're young & that of course -note sarcasm- we don't know anything about anything but no one can define love
love the story :)

so sad to see this go!
but i loved all of it till the end!

Oh you devil! What happened to ten more chapters?
Here I was happy that MC was updated just to see (complete) next to the title.
I am literally on the verge of tears ! But without that said it was a beautiful chapter.
Maybe it's just me but I think it's screaming sequel ! lol jk I'm just sad.
It was a lovely story with awesome characters and even though it ended too soon, I love it :]

I love thisssssss, yes I dooooooo. I don't even know what more to put?
One of these days I'm going to leave you the best damn comment you've ever seen, but until then please know that I love you and this story a whole bunch! xox

I love thisssssss, yes I dooooooo. I don't even know what more to put?
One of these days I'm going to leave you the best damn comment you've ever seen, but until then please know that I love you and this story a whole bunch! xox

Your writing is brilliant. I finally came around to reading stories again and decided to read yours first. What a wonderful choice I made. Keep it up, Jords.