My Calamity - Comments

I'm so glad I found this story again. i dont know why but i never get emails for this story at all. you're writing is so beautiful, I love it and I love Patrick<3

I'm sad about that too! But I liked this chapter a lot.

It was heart-wrenching to read, too. Which, I find, is always a good thing.
I will be so sad when this ends. Pen and Patch are two of my very favorite characters. Ever.

So great(: <3

aww sad this is almost over!
:(

This is such a lovely story that I couldn't help but read it from the beginning again! I will now list everything about this story that I love :] (So far!)

For starters, I use to not be able to stand the name Patrick but I absolutely love it now. Only because he's such a sweetheart. He see's this girl walking down the sidewalk and even though he witness one very embarrassing moment, he still likes her.He doesn't laugh but instead he helps her. And on top of that, how many boys at 17 are willing to pursue a girl because they want a future with them that goes beyond a sexual relationship? Not many .

And when I did finally come back down to earth, long after Penelope had left, I had realized I was ready.
I was ready to make her mine forever. One of my favorite moments ! That's when I fell in love with Patrick.

But who really believes they'd ever have the' can't eat, can't sleep, reach for the stars over the fence, World Series' kind of love. I really love this line. The description of how love can be is just so cute.

I was starting to think maybe Penelope wasn't worth all the trouble. But I knew she was. I knew she was the one I wanted to spend the rest of my life. She was the one there was no way around that. Nothing in this world would change it.

Why couldn't she see that? Just another reason why I love Patrick. He never gives up even though he knows Penelope can break his heart. He's so persistent.

Out of all the chapters, Chapter 17 is my favorite. After Penelope tried so hard to avoid Patrick she finally admits she's afraid. I was just sitting there screaming "FINALLY". I mean how long can a girl stay away from a boy like Patrick?

"Its better to have loved and lost then never loved at all."
My lips quivered. "Why?"
"Because you can never lose love." I really thought this was cute :]

"I'm in love with you Penelope Reid." I don't know if my ears were playing tricks on me, or I'd fainted and fallen into coma, or the pits of hell had opened and condemned me to an eternal nightmare but I was positive what I'd just heard was what I'd just heard. I felt Patrick was closer then before I didn't dare look behind me. I was literally hyperventilating because I knew Penelope was not going to react well and reject him. I thought that this would be the moment Penelope would break Patrick's heart and I was going to be so upset!

I was confused with all my feelings, and I thought sleep would help that but sleep proved impossible because three doors down there was a boy sleeping in his bed and he was in love with me, and I think I might've been in love with him too and that scared me. It scared me so much. Finally she admits to being in love with him! I'm still waiting for the moment she tells Patrick about her father but this will do for now.

Okay, I'm done now. Please, Please, Please update soon. I need to know how this relationship ends! Also what did Ben mean? "Because no good can come from loving someone like that."

I can't wait for more :]

literally, in about 24 hours i've caught up to the latest chapter that you've posted. please please please, post the next one soon! i've gotten into the habit of just clicking the next chapter and reading more of penelope and patrick's story. :( update sooooon!

i just finished 25. i really love this story! penelope is seriously the girl i wish i was. and the one i'm trying to become, i can't wait to read more.

{I should comment more}. Anyway, I wish relationships like this happened to me, because its so sweet how they can confide in each other and accept everything. Another lovely chapter, Jordan!

up through chapter 15 in one day. wow, i love this story :)

this is getting really good! 8 chapters in and i feel like i'm in their little world in michigan. i don't feel like i'm reading it, i feel like i'm seeing it. it takes a great author to do that.

i've only read three chapters so far, but this story gives me the strangest inspiration for myself. i don't even know what it means, i am just inspired to change something, and i know it's a good thing. so, thank you. :)

i've only read three chapters so far, but this story gives me the strangest inspiration for myself. i don't even know what it means, i am just inspired to change something, and i know it's a good thing. so, thank you. :)

Guys in love UMF.

I like Ben. I'd have kicked Patch if it was me sleeping, but then again, it's Patch. Sexual harrassment is in order haa ;]

L-L-L-L-L-L-L-L-L-L-L-L OHHHHHHHHHHHHH VEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD this update :)
ILOVEPATRICKSOMUCHANDHESSOPERFECT! WHYCANTPENELOPELOVEHIM?

Good HAS to come from it, otherwise I will be sad :( LOVE this update!!

That was beautiful Jordan! I love their love, how Patch is the one so in love. I always like it more when the boy is the one head-over-heels.
Golly, this is the best thing in my life :] xox

loved the update!
this is so good!

When is more coming out?

Wow, I just DIED. This is just beautiful, I love it so much it's ridiculous. BEAUTIFUL! and LOVE!
Oh woman, when he told her he loved her, it was just so wonderful. You wrote this like a pro. Like... look at me, all gibberish. And weird.

Look, I love it so much this is what happened.