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  • celestial_royalty

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    Awwwwwwwww so sweet! Yes I definitely like this ending better than the whole wedding scene. I'm not sure about how realistic it is, because I think they would have ended up married but again, I do love how you closed the story. But at the end, isn't the song "so far away" and not "so far way"?

    <3333 the story, you know I do!
    March 12th, 2011 at 12:12pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I love the ending :) im really going to miss this story
    March 12th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    I LOVED THE ENDING!!! It was perfect!! Great job!!!
    March 12th, 2011 at 07:27am
  • a venom

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    loved the way you ended it
    March 12th, 2011 at 07:17am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    *claps loudly* I LOVED THIS STORY!
    You did a fantastic job and I truely loved it!
    It had twist, turns, mush, sex, more mush and sex XD
    Just an overall great story to read when I needed a happy boost!

    Thank you for sharing this thought with all of us mibbian readers :)
    *hugs author* hehehe can't wait for other stories!
    March 12th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • Acid_Rain.

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    *round of applause* I have to say..this story made me cry. Its truly hard reading a story without Jimmy. But nevertheless, I loved it. Excellent story! :')
    March 12th, 2011 at 06:10am
  • HGatesAces

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    i loved this story!!!! im so sad its done :-( and does brian really have a tongue ring? because i will wil' out if his does...
    March 12th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    Im so sad its over =(
    this is one of my favorites =)

    Amazing story! =)
    March 12th, 2011 at 05:43am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Okay so I really loved the ending. It was perfect for this story and just made it that much better! I think you made the right decision in not doing an epilogue, and as you know...I can't wait to read some more stuff from you! You're awesome! :)
    March 12th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • MykalaNoelle

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    I loved this Alot..
    im sad that its over ):
    but the ended was perfect <3 (:
    March 12th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • hachie

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    Wow an awesome way to end things, a very sexy smut! XD
    So Val is still mad at her since she apparently stole Brian away from her sister.
    But at least the others guys welcomed her with open arms and made her feel apart of the family.
    I very much love reading this story and I can't wait for the new stories you'll come out with!!!!!
    Congratulation on finishing another story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 12th, 2011 at 04:55am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Wow!!
    I missed a lot, but I'm caught up now!!
    So sad to see this story comin to an end! :(
    March 11th, 2011 at 05:19am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Loved it! I will be so sad when this ends, but I can't wait for the new story soon. More soon, please?
    March 10th, 2011 at 06:51pm
  • a venom

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    i loved the mom's threat
    can't wait for more
    March 10th, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Baha, I love when Karol told Brian she'd cut his fingers off. Update soon?
    March 10th, 2011 at 12:00am
  • Crimson TigerLily

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    Aw, so sweet <3 UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
    March 9th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • starr8nn

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    Oh My God. Your seeing A7X too? I'm seeing them days later after you on the 30th..You've met them before??
    March 9th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • pixiedusttt.

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    Hopefully Erick will find a nice girl :)
    Looks like Sera's mom doesn't hate Brian anymore...
    I'm sooo happy that her dad woke up :D:D
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    March 9th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Im glad to see working out with sera and her mom. Great update :)
    March 9th, 2011 at 02:52pm
  • avenging angel

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    Yeah so I think sera's mom doesn't hate brian A's before so that's good!!!:). D= can't believe this is vet close to an end :(
    March 9th, 2011 at 11:19am