His parents are going to have a field day when they find out about Jen Not only a (for them) strange girl living in their home and she's pregnant I have the feeling that Val's going to do something when he picks her up on Saturday I feel really sorry for Jen though She's gonna be alone on Saturday and be wondering about Matt all evening I really can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
Ps. And a tip from my side, you should check your grammar. You always seem switch between present and past, back and forth.
Whoa, what the fuck.... Even if it was Matt's child, they don't have a right to kick her out of the orphanage But I'm so glad that Matt realized that it's her choice when she's going to tell the others And now he even took her in I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
Ps. There were several grammatical mistakes, you sometimes used present (sits, eats and whatnot) but normally you use past (ate, sat and whatnot). You should read over the chapter once more and check that :)
In a way, Matt was being an inconsiderate ass If Jen doesn't want to tell the others yet, she just doesn't want to It's just a damn fact that she doesn't know the others that long enough And as for the fact that she told Matt, she just has a lot of trust in him because she is in love with him But he's just thickheaded and doesn't get that Hm, hopefully the orphanage will take it all well I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
I like it!!! i started to cry when Matt found out she was raped & pregnant. It sucked about that part. Anyway I loved ti & keep updating please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Aw, I'm so glad that Matt is still there for her after Jen told him all of that But that really proves how much he actually cares about her Hm, I wonder what the whole group will think when they find out that Jen is pregnant Val and Isabella are probably going to have a field day or they'll both think it's Matt's child Then maybe they would finally leave them alone I'm really looking firward for more Hope you update soon :)