The Life of An American Orphan. - Comments

PURPLE! bahaha loved the update i thought that if woulda been his dad answering the phone but he didnt. lolz can't wait for more! =D lolz

Purple??

Purple!!!

LOVED the update and definitely purple cant wait for the next UPDATE!!!!!

purple..

PURPLE.

Purple!! x

Purple!! x

Loved the update
A little creepy how she looked up his number online haha
Oh and purple definitely purple
<3 Michele

PURPLE!!!1

Purple:)

this is amazing so far I really like it. Its a shame that it happened to her though.

"Did you know that out of all teen pregnancy 57% is born and that 29% is terminated by abortion? And worse, 14% end in miscarriage, what if Jen is one of those 19 percent?"
wait how did you get 19%?

Aww, the chapter wasn't sucky at all
It was really important to the story line
Espcially the first part with Jen and Sarah
Jen can count herself so damn lucky that Sarah is there for her
I mean her first reaction was kinda freaking out, but she immeditely realized that it wasn't right
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Ps. You gotta be abit more careful with writing. You sometimes switched between the different tenses (past and present). You mostly write in past (said, had, made, etc.) so you gotta change some parts where you wroote in present (says, has, makes, etc.). Just you know.

This was a okay update
don't get me wrong it wasn't sucky by any means, it was very important to the story line, but i almost feel like the Matt section could have been left out. I really would have liked to have read the whole chapter with Sarah and Jen
. . . Did i just put my foot in my mouth? i hope not.
As far as the mushy chapter. I love it, the mushier the better!!! :D
<3 Michele

I didn't think that chapter sucked, in fact, write more! bahaha

loved it
I know i said this last time but it makes me really happy that he is sticking around with her
<3 Michele

In my opinion it's definitley not awful to not want the baby, especially one that was caused due to a rape
Jen is still young and that's another factor
She has every right to hope that the test would come back negative; that she's not pregnant
But it looks like her prayers went unanswered
She is now pregnant.....
I guess her lack of reaction was because she was still numb and in shock from finding out that she's in fact pregnant
The doctor was way too cheery in my mind
Jen has to deal with a.lot and then having such a cheery doctor....
I'm just soo glad that Matt's sticking by her side
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

I expected more of a reaction from her
Matt is so sweet for sticking around I love him
He should tell her he loves her
I can't wait for more !
Miyuh

:D He makes me smile so much
<3 Michele