The Life of An American Orphan. - Comments

  • the-quiet-one

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    I kinda thought there for a moment that Matt left, but I'm glad that he didn't
    Hopefully Jen will be able to tell Sarah everything that she had kept bottled up
    Sarah definitley has to know, they are after all like sisters
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    December 19th, 2010 at 01:18pm
  • Phoebe_

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    If you want my 2 cents. I say the prego thing was a pretty big twist. I say make it a false alarm....she's only 16, her bf didn't get her knocked up some rapist did, and she only been dating matt a short amount of time to have them "parents"...Idk just my 2 cents
    December 19th, 2010 at 07:06am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Aww, I'm so glad that Matt said he'd stay with her
    But I'm not gonna lie, taking that drink, from someone she doesn't even know was pretty damn stupid from Jen
    Despite how nice a person seems never take a drink like that from a stranger when you don't see how he makes it
    I kinda hope that the guys will find that guys and fuck him up
    Ohhh and Matt could get in fu****g trouble with his parents (especially his father) for beating someone up and then maybe landing himself in jail
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    December 18th, 2010 at 04:32pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    I was so glad when Matt said he'd stay with her
    I really hope means that :)
    December 18th, 2010 at 11:04am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    :[ poor girl
    I hope Matt stays with her
    please update soon
    <3 Michele
    December 18th, 2010 at 05:42am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Matt's ahfuckingmazing:)
    December 18th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    Awww matt's so awesome
    I'm seriously hoping it's a false positive
    Very sad what happened to her
    Matt and the guys should go fuck that guy up !
    Love this story.
    Miyuh
    December 18th, 2010 at 02:50am
  • IvySaint

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    it must be reaaaaaaaallllllllllllllly hard for her right now, hope she can get through, =D
    December 18th, 2010 at 02:31am
  • Chilindrina

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    wait wtff
    ¿¿¡.,.,when they have sex,.,.,.!??

    ¡¡,.update soon plzz,.!!
    December 17th, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    That's so horrible of you to leave us there!!!!
    please update super duper soon
    I must know what he is going to say
    <3 Michele
    December 16th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    OH DAMN! shes pregnant thats some serious shiznit right there man UPDATTEE! i wanna see what happens next!!!
    December 16th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • starbella

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    umm im asking you to try not to make it one of those stories where it some else's bab but matt stays anywat and it's happily ever after blah blah blah
    I think something tragic should happen (im so twisted xD)
    Like a car crash, kidnapping or something ;]
    oh and I love this story!!!!
    BTW incase you didn't notice
    “I’ll call her, she you guys at lunch” I said and both nodded and made their way down the hallway to what I assume was Sarah’s class.

    "She you guys at lunch" Did you mean see? haha just checken cause people will report you for such a little mistake :(
    welll I think thats it....
    bye! <3
    December 15th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • misery_writer925

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    Wait am confuse did she and Matt do it or did she get raped?
    December 15th, 2010 at 10:10pm
  • poorsadpoofy

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    O_o; whaaaaaa?
    totally didn't see that one coming.
    how is she pregnant?!
    i don't remember her having sex with anyone.
    im so lost. lol
    so you better update soon so I know how this all went down. :D
    p.s. he better stay with her! >:|
    I mean it! :b
    December 15th, 2010 at 09:41pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    I can say cliffhanger xD
    Wow...
    I want to say i didn't see that coming, but i ruined the chapter for myself by checking how long it was before reading it (I had to go out so i was checking if i had time to read or not) and i saw the last line xD
    It was still a shock though. I thought it couldve some how been Val trying to mess with or something, so i'm glad it wasn't that. But Woah....She's pregnant!!!!!!!
    I need to know what happens next
    The Reaction!!!!!!!
    More soon pretty pretty please with lemons on top :)
    December 15th, 2010 at 09:37pm
  • lollipop102

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    awww poor girl
    December 15th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • lizicea7x

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    ohh please pretty please update soon i whant to know what is going to happen
    December 15th, 2010 at 09:11pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Whoa, I so didn't see that one coming....
    Holy fuck.....O_o
    I sooo bet that it's because of whoever had raped her
    Hopefully, so damn hopefully, will Matt help her through this
    This will so break her even more when he abandons her
    I'm sooo damn looking forward to the next one
    Hope you update soon :)
    December 15th, 2010 at 08:17pm
  • IvySaint

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    whoa! I didnt expect to read that! lolz
    December 15th, 2010 at 05:37pm
  • mademoiselle

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    I'm sorry, you ruined the story for me...with the whole pregnancy thing :/
    I absolutely despise reading teen pregnancy stories, it's so cliche -- uhh but yeah have fun writing in the future, but I must stop reading here. It was an amazing story, until the whole preggo drama, good luck :)
    December 15th, 2010 at 04:46pm