The Shadows' Child - Comments

Very good, I like your writing style a lot. I havn't read any vampire fictions in a while, but this one was memorable. I love your characters as well. I hope you continue :)

This story is definitely not something I'm into. It's just the subject, not your writing, so you need not take it personally of course, It is, however. really weol written. I do very much like your writing style.

I really like this story, and I couldn't help but notice you actually read one of my stories and commented. Hi again. Anyway, this story is really cool, as are a lot of vampire stories. But this one has a nice balance of dialogue and detail. I liked the first chapter where Ceara was thinking about his blood, even when she hadn't bitten him yet, and how she could smell it through his skin. It's really cool. And a blood and gore person like myself, I always appreciate that sort of stuff. Keep it up!

I've been looking for a good vampire story for a while now, and I'm so glad to have finally found one! I love your description of her biting the man in the first chapter! The banter between Tristan and Ceara is also really great! I can't wait to see what happens next with Liam.

I only found one slight error. In chapter 3, during the tarot card reading, Liam's name is replaced with Tristan's several times. I would maybe just look over it once more and fix the names.

Please keep updating! (: I can't wait to read more!

i really like this. i don't know why, but at first i didn't know it was vampires (duh! stupid me), but then when the plot really kicked into gear i was like 'yes!'. it's well written, and the way you write characters interacting with each other is really great, probably my favourite thing about the story actually.

also ceara sounds like a babe.

I actually loved it, but anything that involves vampires just makes me so happy. I also love the characters especially Ceara. I am only on the second chapter but so far everything is fantastic, you actually use English so much better than other stories that I have read. I am in love with it and I hope that you continue to write!