Dangerous Betrayal - Comments

i'm loving the story! keep it up :)

I really hope Maxine and Laim will be together. If they stip playing games with each other they could be happy. I love this story. :)

Sorry, I have been so extrememly busy, so I haven't had time to read or comment, but you should know after not being on Mibba for 4 months? Your story was the first one I came back to read:)

I really love this story and I just want Max and Liam to be happy with each other, I want them to happily love each other and their unborn child. Max should just let go of the past, no matter how hard it is for her, and look to the future and she should acknowledge what she has before she loses it and regrets it.

<3<3<3 you!

Please make her move on and be happy but you know right after she gives Robert and her mother that good beating they deserve ;) anyways please update soon!! <3 it =D

I love this chapter! I don't know what I want her to do, but I just want Maxine to be happy :) Thanks for another awesome update!

Hell yeah! she should move on, she should leave everyone that screw her over behind and start from zero =D, but you know right after she gives robert and her mother that scare ;)

Love your story by the way <3 Please update soon!!

Please update soon =D

I love the update and your story is great can't wait to read more

I'm really liking the whole edit story thing special if Maxine leaves everyone that screwed her over behind and starts over with her baby =D, if you do make Maxine leave I'm thinkin' London, Rome, Milan, New York, or Paris just really cool places out of the top of my head

P.S Love your story <3

I kinda really dig this story.

I give up, i didn't like the fact you re-edited the whole story, Sorry.

I love your plot; but, I should say that you need to work on your grammar. I get confused because some of the sentences lack word/s and punctuation marks. I would like to read more of this story. I hope you either update or write a sequel about what will happen with their marriage or something. :) Well, goodluck and I hope you still get inspired to continue writing this story. :)

I'm confused.... I just hope Maxine can be happy =)

I absolutely love this story! :)

I really liked chap 26! I really hope they can be happy! Maxine should forget her revenge and go away and make a happy life with Liam!

Gah, i hope she stays with him.!.
I really wish that she would realize that he really does love her and that he isn't lieing because i feel like because they don't "love" people or trust people they would be perfect for each other.
I want to know whats going to happen to her mother and robert.
sarah.

update soon please

I like it. But i just wish that Liam had decked robert so hard that he would have to go to the hospital. Hmpf. I kind of sort of want Maxine to be happy with Liam for them to finally realize that they are perfect for each other and that they both love each other. GOSH DARN i want to know what this plan is. XD
post more soon cause i love this story more than watching my college baseball games on espn.

I hope Maxine can be happy! She deserves it after all she have gone through! ^.^

I'm kinda of glad she with pregger and Liam now, so Robert and her mother can go f-ck themsleves so she can hopefully have a happy ending =D