She Was Fading - Comments

Just like everyone else, I cried. How absolutely heartbreaking. What was she sick with though, cancer?

oh my gosh. i actually cried.
i never cry.
you are amazing :)

I expected it, and I knew for sure it was coming, but I still had to read it over and over to understand.
How come she had to die? Why is it that all the good people have to leave?
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As did part of my heart... How could she die?!?!?! :( I reread it about four time..... ::tear::

chp 52 broke my heart even through i knew it will happen, still sad to read it

Wow. Thats all i can say really. I normally don't comment on stories. I just read them, smile, laugh, sometimes cry, then go on my way. But this. This story says more than I expected. This story was sad, happy, broken, numb, so many other things that I don't think have a name. This story was amazing. I didn't cry, it wasn't that kind of story, but it was a story that touched your heart. I'm not sure if this was something that happened before, if it just came to you, I really don't know, but whatever the inspiration behind this story, it is truely special.

i cried.

thast all there is to say

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this story is so emotional. i love it so much, and i hope it's not going to end anytime soon . . .

so, i just started reading this story. and i love it.
i love that its so simple, and that its not a love story, but a story about love.
i hope its not over yet.

This is SO sad....

I love how they aren't like secretly in love or anything... They just love each other. It's really refreshing after all the love stories I've read on here.

aw its so sad shes like dying before his eyes.

:(

They need to get together or something before this ends.
FOR REAL.
:3

I'm actually addicted to this story!
I love it so much
Your a brilliant writer!!
Update soon =]

I've said it before.
I'll say it again.
I'm in love with Christian and Delilah.
I'll cry when this story is over.
That is all.
Lovely, update soon.

Wait, wait, wait.
Christian and Stella are getting married? When did this happen?
This is all so sudden!

soo many updates so quickly!!

i cant believe stella and christian are getting married!

Oh how it breaks my heart that Christian cannot see Caroline.
Hm, sounds weird to call them anything other than Tom and Delilah.
But the names fit them perfect in my book, (: and they flow well together too.
Wonderful story.

Beautiful.

BITCH, IF YOU KILL HER I AM GOING TO REACH THROUGH THIS COMPUTER SCREEN AND STEAL YOUR NOSE. YEAH. I'LL JUST TAKE IT OFF YOUR FACE. AND THEN YOU WON'T HAVE A NOSE TO BREATH WITH AND YOU'LL JUST HAVE TO USE YOUR MOUTH WHICH ISN'T SUPPOSED TO BE GOOD FOR YOU OR SOMETHING.

This comment didn't make any sense. Update soon, plz.

oh no. this means shes going to be dying soon 0_o