First off, I should've been thanked FIRST in the thanking part :P haha
Secondly, OMG OMG OMG you better write a sequel now, it would be so interesting and I know you would make it fucking awesome! I was smiling so bad the whole time I read this, my heart lept with joy! I would love to read about her working with them, and pretty much dating Jimmy, and the fact it's his first personal slave is so sweet:) Make the story soooon woman:)
OMG! No way! I thought she was going to become Matt's slave. I totally did not expect that, Not at all. I loved the story, can't wait for the sequal XD
It breaks my heart that this story is over, though I am beyond excited about the sequel. Uh, should I remain subscribed to this story? You know, to know when the sequel starts?
BTW! For a second I thought Sophia was gonna be given to Gates. I was like, "OMG NO - wait, JIMMY!" You seriously made my night a whole lot better.
This story was so twisted get held a glimmer of hope. I enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more from you. :)
The ending made me cry YAY! She gets Jimmy:)I'm happy now at least she doesn't have to deal with Gates' torture. Hopefully! YAY love the story btw and my one suggestion is to make the sequel longer in either discription or dialog or something even adding more drama or explaining the nights or some of the days in the time elapses or something doesn't have to be awsome sometime \s it just needs to be there.
Totally called it! I'm happy for her! Except, for a second there, I though Gates was gonna be her master... Why does he hate her so damn much?! I feel like he might do something horribly Synsyter (haa, a pun) like frame her for something. I'm glad there will be a sequel. :)
Shit... My heart is racing.... That's awkward, but congrats! I take a lot to actually make me feel a story and you did it. This chapters had me chewing my nails and moving back and forward, for real. I don't want this to end! so I think a Sequel would be a great option, I just hope it is as good as the first part. Well... I hope Plague takes her! You made me fall for Jimmy in this one, like for real.... I used to think that synyster was super hot but now i just don't think that anymore! I fell For Jimmy! XD I love this story and girl... Congratulations for your awesome job you should consider taking your job to higher levels. I hope you publish a book someday, and believe me that if that happens I would be more than honored to have the author's signature in it. You are awesome, few people can do what you do. XOXO KnifeMistress