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This is amazing:) u r fuckin brilliant writer:) please please update soon I need to kno what happens:D

Omg. Next chapter nowwwww.

Nooo, you can't kill off the main character! Can't wait 'til the next chapter.

Keep going!!!! :)

Love it :) please update soon

oh my god! Mikey! totally wasn't expecting THAT omfg it was amazing, like always, sarah(: update soon :D

Three words:
I.
LOVE.
IT!!!

XD i subscribed and everything :D haha and ur really talented, keep it up!

I just started this story today and I love it! And the book Perfect Chemistry is amazing, and one of my favorite books :)

I am finally back in america!
Cant wait for the spanish! lol!
Hint hint...dominic can hint at me any time...swoon!

I am finally back in america!
Cant wait for the spanish! lol!
Hint hint...dominic can hint at me any time...swoon!

YES! SEXY TIME! lol yayy :D haha loved it(:

Omigosh! Perfect Chemistry was an amazing book! I feel kinda late in saying this but I love your story! I going to stalk you and subscribe to everything you write beacuse you're amazing! I just creeped myself ot but that doesn't matter gotta get back to reading

i LOVE this story so much
can't wait for more!

OHMYGOD!
GAHHH, I WAS RIGHT!
The minute I read the title, I was like 'Oh shit, they're gonna do the deed.'
And they did.
I'm extremely good with predictions nowadays.

Mikey is just amazing. I adore that little kid<3

It would be a best seller! I mean, a 9 year old boy wrote a book about gettin' chicks, why can't Dom?

Oof. That chapter was hot. I mean, dammmnnn. And the Spanish made it hotter...my god, it did, it made it hotter. Just...damn. The beginning, though, when they were discussing what they were going to do and sex wasn't on the list, I was like "HOLY FUCK, YOU'RE ALONE, MADLY IN LOVE, AND YOU LIKE EACH OTHER'S BODIES. SLEEP WITH EACH OTHER, GODDAMMIT!"
And then they did, so I was like, WOOT!
Anyways, this chapter made me flip-flop all happy like.

Update soon(:

I can't wait for their week alone ;)
ahhaha

oh my gosh. i just started reading this story, and i regret not starting sooner. the plot is really good and original compared to some other stories i've browsed through on this website. good work & keep it up. oh and update soon if it's not too much trouble. i REALLY need to know what happens next. : )

I'm addicted to this story, and you're a fantastic writer. Update soon? Or I might be forced to take drastic measures.

cute new background(: update soon :D

If you separated them, I probably would've cried, but that's okay, me ist happy with this!
Oh dear lord...me+skating+dress=mega accidental flashing party. No joke.
I LOVED this chappy, dearest!

Oh gosh, Dom, you sexy little creeper, you horny little half-delinquent. Is it me, or do I smell a sex scene coming?
-sniffs-
Oh, it's there alright.
-sniffs again-
Now it smells like air.
-sniffs one last time-
I smell trouble. Lately, I've been smelling a lot of predictions in this story. My magic is finally working, I swear.

Anywhore, I think that this chapter was cute. Mikey is my son now. Nope, no doubt about it, I adore that kid like cheesy peanut butter (...not a good example. o_O). Still, I love him. He's definitely one of my favorite characters. Dominic should definitely write a book, tentatively titled 'How to Woo Your Chica in Just A Few Easy Steps' because I'd buy that for my potential husband (if I ever have one), throw it in his face, and hope to god that he gets the message.

Update soon!<333

Love it xD