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Perfect Chemistry is such a good book and you are doing it justice with this story.
I love it so much. Update more!
And baby put the translations of the spanish in the author's note?
I speak french and english but no spanish whatsoever lol

I have no words.
You probably know by now, the extent of love I have for the beauty that is this story and the characters apart of it.
If not...I LOVE CARMEN GURERERERERERAAA (in the alternate universe, she's probably cursing at me in spanish for the incorrect spelling of her last name) AND DOMMY DOM. <3

Nice! Dom's a softie and Carmen's a softie at heart =D. I got so confused at the start of the chapter by the dream, I was like, whoa! when it turned out that Dom had heard her and admitted to the shower haha. Totally brilliant writing. =D

Woah boy, reign in yer horse. Read the rest and was like damn! They might as well have gone on with it and nice excuse Carmen :3 lol bug bite. Thank you for the shout out! Didn't see it last time because I didn't get to finish and remembered to come back just now when you updated. So I finished reading and read the next chapter.

Put some clothes on I'm sure you could at least do that before going back to a ladies room. I got the idea he might wanna go at it then. Which I was surprised when it started off that way, but turned out to be Carmen's dream x] Tricky there, tryin to fool me! >_>

Oooo a blast from the past! Stealin papa bears gun o.o! Came in handy though, never know who you'll find yerself facing when going back to the old neighborhood. Laughed at the "mushy" comment x]

Nice chapter <3

i rellly reallly like this story.. :D pleasee update <3

This is a really great story! I can totally see the resemblance to "Perfect Chemistry", but it's different and appealing! Love the make-out scene! ;-)
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE write more! i subscribed! =)

Wah, I didn't get to read the whole thing but I will when I get home.
That letter Davey left had me nearly crying. And I would have cried if I wasn't sitting in a lab full of my classmates.
Assuming I liked the hoodie I might have stolen it too. :P
And oh...golly, gee. Doesn't that boy have a game to play. Course I only got as far as the kissin so You'll be seeing another comment from me once I read the rest :P

I love this story:D

"Now there getting somewhere"
Oh, my grammar is awful. I meant 'they're'. (;

GAH, I'm running late for school now cos I was just so determined to read this. I was literally happy dancing when I got a notification that you'd updated!
For the love of all that is holy, they finally kissed. Behind the bleachers! Very hot. Now there getting somewhere..
Aw, I feel so special that I got a shout-out alongside SleepyNyx. (:
THANK YOU SWEETIE!

Wah! Fun fun. :3 I like the story and if anything Mickey is my favorite character here~ He really is lucky. Chapter lengths are fine, it's only when you get to the end that you realize you read that much.

and lol at what lovely bones said. xD

-Waits for next chapter-

Carmen and Dominic. Please just get together already. The sexual tension is looming. If it means hanky panky under the bleachers then so be it! (;

this is beautiful. i couldn't help myself, i just had to subscribe(:

i love this! cant wait for more!! <3

really like this story perfect summer read. hope to get to read more soon =]

i love this story! keep writing!

I love it. Cn yhu upload some more please.

~Jamie~

i love it!
it sounds so interesting!
keep up the good work hun!!
XD

I love this story.. please keep writing:)

I love it(:

Subscribing now.