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Awwwww No spanish!
:P
I will live.
Cuz it was a cute chapter anyway haha
(I am LexaMig, btw)

UGH. I seriously need a boyfriend like Dom. My boyfriend is not the type to tie up my laces (Yeah, he's mean like that). Dom needs to teach my guy some serious lessons in 'How to treat your girl'.
Yes, Darmen. That's their couple name from now on. And this chapter was too cute for words. I was literally aww-ing the whole way through. Beautiful. <3

Rules of attraction is a good book! The first one is perfect chemistry. But they're different love stories. Also when Carmen said she was from the hood you said good! We all make mistakes. Keep up the good work!

lulz, punny indeed(:
Anywayyyyys, I do adore this chapter. So sweet...I love the whole Piper and Ben thing. Part of me is rooting for her to still be waiting while the other part of me is hoping that she's moved on and it'll be really complex and stuff. But I'm just weird like that, haha.
Skating in a dress...oi, I can't skate myself, let alone in a dress.
I like this chapter[x

Update soon, dear<3

freaking amazing(:
<33

i love this. keep updating! <3

I ship this couple so much. They are seriously too cute for words. Darmen forever! <3
I think you explore the complexity of their love really well. The fact that love isn't an airy fairy bubble; it's a magnet of threat and dilemmas. But oh my god, the idea of the two going ice-skating is beautiful and romantic! I can't wait for the next chapter.

N'aww, I missed you too! I missed your wonderful writing. Fuck yeah Harry Potter! Rupert Grint is so edible and cute and ginger; I love it! And I've never balled my eyes out at any HP movie ever, but Deathly Hallows Part 1 killed me. I can't bloody wait until Part 2 AHHHHHH!

OMG! I love the book Perfect Chemistry, and honestly that's exactly what I thought of when I started reading this. Have you read the sequel to it? I think it's called Fatal Attraction or something like that. That one is really good too :)
Definitely subscribing and can't wait to read more!!

You updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed ! :D
I think the whole mother-daughter-bonding part with Emma and Carmen was cute, I hope they stay that way with each other. And the way Dom's parents met is so adorable/taboo romance novel. xD Is Dom really going to take Carmen ice skating? And if he does I want to see Dom fall so Carmen can laugh at him. >:D

I wasn't trying to be mean or anything!! I hope you know!!! And it's totally not your fault. Internet translations suck!!!
I'm glad to help whenever ;)

YUSHHHH!
-grabs gun-
KAPOWKAPOWKAPOW!
-sniffs the air-
I smell dead people. Well, a dead dumbass, but that's as close as I can get.

lmfao. Thanks(:
WHOA, A SEX SCENE BETWEEN DOMDOM AND CARMY?!
Cha-ching! I knew it was coming!
Least expecting it?
Goddammit, it better be soon though.
This chapter was fantastic, love<3

update soon(:

Yep, indeed. Orlando should be grateful. God, their children are gonna be beautiful. I love Josh, but the fact that he's with Fergie makes me cringe. He could do so much better than her! He's wasting potential. Where's the guy's standards?
Wonderfully written chapter. I sincerely apologise for the late response. I've had a busy week cos I was too caught up in preparing myself for the London Harry Potter premiere, which may I add, was FUCKING OUT OF THIS WORLD! But, back to Life Unedited, loved the chapter as per usual! (:

Protective Dom is sexy ;)
It was cute how he defended Maria and JP.
I'm so glad everything is looking up for Carmen. She has a hottie boyfriend, a home, and now she knows what she's wants to do with her life.
Social work is great. I agree, waaaaay to many kids are left in the system. I was in the foster system but lucky I was adopted by a great family at a really really young age. Like 5 months or something. So my family is the only one I've ever known. But some kids don't get that.

And I can't believe that Emma walked in when Dom had a boner! Hahahaha that's so embarrassing!
Carmen should have helped him with it ;)
Great update!!! Please post soon!!

Yeah, I want to get the sequel type thingie to it :D
And I will keep commenting as long as you keep the story as amazing as it is now. ;)
BTW, I think it's os cute the way you have Carmen constantly teasing Dominic when he think he's being all big and bad, then she does something and he's like -shake, blush- xD

Moved the chapter!!!! If you leed heló with spanish you can ask me cause translators arent that good lol
Cant wait for the next one!!!

A wevo!!!! Spanish galore!!!!
Imma cry with happiness!
She found her calling!
And she called Emma mom!
Sweetness!

I love him period, just like I loved this update.
Oh Dom.
-sigh-
LOLOLOLOLOL. TEAM EMMA.
YOU CAN'T SPELL 'STUD' WITHOUT 'STD', DOM. REMEMBER THAT!
Omfglolroflmfao.

Me likie this. Javier can go suck my cock. What a horrible little bitch. Poor María. I feel bad for her. She got knocked up by some idiot. Can I have permission to shoot him while he's in jail?
Meanwhile...
Ooooohhhh.
-swoons-
It's gettin' hot n' spicy between Carmen and Dominic. Is it me, or did she just bare it all, right there in front of him? (I feel like I'm advertising pornography when I say that.)
But fo' realz, I wanna see them get all hot and heavy. Really. Didn't she already take care of 'Little...Big Dom' once already? Oh, and I totally LOL'd at that part. No joke.
Seriously. It's only a matter of time before they cling tightly onto each other and never let go, too captivated by each other's ravishing beauty and gorgeously radiated selves. So long as they don't have sex yet. I wanna see them make love MUCH later, but anytime works for me.

ENOUGH OF MY RANTING!
Update young missy!

Caleb...a man after my own heart :P haha
So sweat! he wants a ring on her finger and a baby!
Damn...i want a "Dom"

I just found out today that there's a sequel to Perfect Chemistry!! I thought you'd like to know if you already didn't ;)
Great update. It's so cute that Dom give Mickey his bear! And good thing they aren't legit adopting Carmen...that would be weird and incestuous lol.
Poor Carmen :( all beat up from that nasty ass ho. I've had a bruise on my ribs before so I feel her pain lol
Emma has to be one of the funniest/cutest moms ever.