SuperHero - Comments

so ive actually goten around to reading this XD ahaha so uhm i should have gone to bed like 2 hours ago cause i need to get up early... but i started reading this and didnt realize that it took so long....

iloveit.

I love V for Vendetta. <3

Grr...I thought I had an idea of Hero; I thought I knew that he had ulterior motives and secretly was bad. But now I'm not sure about anything at this point! Oh well. I still loved it :) it was an awesome update, and I can't wait for the next one. The quote at the bottom just sounds like one of those inspirational quotes; I feel inspired, but to do what? I have no idea. I guess I just feel inspired to read your story. If that makes sense. Or maybe your whole story is just inspiring....Grr...I'm confused. But I still loved it :)

All I have to say is: Beautiful update. I loved the quote at the bottom.
Hero is still kind of iffy with me, but I can't help but love him a little.
Poor Elena. I wouldn't be able to handle all that. I'd probably cry, I love people, so nice. :)
Welp, until next time! <3

Okay, so I'm still having a foreboding feeling about Hero. I LOVE him, don't get me wrong, but now it's starting to feel like he's hiding his true evil behind the mask. Like, double agent or something, seriously. It makes my tummy wiggle and squirm in a way that feels really icky. Haha. To sound like a little kid.

I like the cave and all the people there, but I just feel like there's something wrong, and I can't put my finger on it just yet.

Until next time...

As always, another awesome chapter from you & don't worry your inspirational speeches are just fine
Ahhh huzzah to Batcaves! Fictional or not
Wanna know what the quote in your author's note reminded me of - the last scene with Evie & that one ministry type guy at the end of V for Vendetta

I still have a bad feeling about Hero..

My God, woman! My mind is officially blown. I even believed in Hero when he told Elena that inspiring speech, and this is all a piece of fiction xD. I understand what you were getting at now.

And that whole underground tunnel/cavern full of hope and determined people was absolutely amazing to read about. I didn't know so many people knew about what Hero was doing and depended on his bravery for their peace. It really is fascinating and absolutely adorable to see what Hero is doing for everyone <3.

See?! He ain't evil, people!

Chapter 18: Oh wow....that was amazing! I can't believe the large gathering of rebels! I hope they take down the evil ruler and can finally be free! :D

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Once you mentioned V for Vendetta, all I could think was, "Oh dear God, Hero is going to die."
Couldn't help it Dx

And just for the record, Hero's attitude is scaring me. Like, a lot. He's acting too much like Joren. :)

-sigh-

I can't make head nor tails of the difference you're implying. Ha. But I still can't wait until the next chapter :)

BACK OFF SOPHIA BEFORE ME AND ELENA KICK YO BUTT.

Loved the update, //fans self
Daaaamn Hero. I'm proud that Elena fought off his advances. I wouldn't have lasted.

That last bit of the chapter makes me worry though. Who is Sophia and why is he being all...weird? ASFGJKLJ. Y U DO THIS!?

I love you and this story and Elena but Hero is on my iffy list right now. <3

Oooh look, another update :D But poopy, I dunno what to expect!! I mean, I do, but I don't, but.... kMAKDNFUIOENCIASKD I have a brilliant idea. UPLOADMORE? :D<3

Yeah...I get this vibe that Hero is faking to a certain extent.I think maybe he doesn't really like Elena, or just not as much as he says he does.
He is giving off another bad vibe too but I don't really know how to describe it so I'm going to leave it at that. (And I wouldn't be surprised if I'm completely wrong about him, but oh well)

Chapter 17: Ok I admit it, Hero is acting a little bit shady and I really wanna know what's going on with him! Maybe Elena should start detaching herself from him a little bit?!

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It kinda seems like Hero is evil, or even that he's controlling Elena's mind to some extent!
Creepy, but well written :)

I really don't like Hero at all right now..

Oh gosh, the beginning of the chapter was steamy! *fans face with hands* D:. Damn, Hero ;).

Humm, I'm not very good at guessing/comparing things. This is probably way off, but maybe Hero's playing it off like nothing bad is coming up :S? I tried to think of past scenes like the beginning in your other stories, and I can only think of one from Stray. Darren was kissing Annie and then said he had to leave (I think? I can't be bothered to look for the scene xD) and that if he didn't return later that night, she could assume he'd be dead by then? Right? So maybe Hero is acting all chil, but something bad is a'coming ;O. Haha, I fail, but, hey, I tried C;.

Let's see what's really goin' on...

Wah this story has me on the edge of my seat! I havent read any of your other works so I dont know anything about your style, but I keep feeling like theres something not quite right with Hero. Like he's hiding something. Anyway I can't wait to read the next chapter!