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  • horserideraja

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    all im saying is there better be a happy ending for this poor girl, she needs it, like a lot. having her first boyfriend go legit crazy on her isnt great for her but it makes one heck of a story. please update?<3
    August 21st, 2011 at 05:02am
  • lynziejay44

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    I agree with lil_angel666 (which is an oxymoronish username..lol..my English vocabulary final kicked in and I used 'oxymoron' correctly), Hero is bi-polar. Meds are seriously needed.

    But I still thought it was funny and cute that he dragged her to his room.
    Even though I'm officially afraid of Hero. (another oxymoron)

    Anyway, I loved the update. Scary, but awesome.

    Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the phenomenal work :)

    Sincerely,
    August 21st, 2011 at 04:21am
  • lil_angel666

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    OK I didn't get the hidden message but I do reckon Hero needs to be on meds for his serious Bi-polar issue!!!!!

    I mean mood-swing much!!?

    Anyways, update when you can!!!!
    August 21st, 2011 at 02:56am
  • St_Atrocity

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    Meep. Welp, I have my guess as to which sentence is le big clue.

    That is all.
    August 21st, 2011 at 01:15am
  • eragorn122

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    It's official I defnitely do not trust Hero at all anymore.
    August 20th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 20: Seriously, what is wrong with Hero? It almost seems like he has a split personality or is bipolar! And he still seems to be moving way too fast! >.<

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    August 20th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • The Colour of Music

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    I was saving this story for a rainy day, and I am glad I did.
    I got to read all of the chapters that are up in a row, without breaks, and it was amazing.
    I really like the characters and I think that the twists in the plot are perfect. It really feels like I am right there with the characters, you know?
    So thumbs up for that. ^_^
    I really look forward to more of this wonderful story.
    Also, just a thought, I was wondering if you could draw the masks? I would love to see what they look like in your imagination.
    ♥♥♥
    August 20th, 2011 at 04:58am
  • lynziejay44

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    Holy guacamole.

    You weren't kidding when you said goodies. Those. Were. Awesome! I love love LOVE the drawing of Hero. He looks amazing! And exactly what I pictured in my head! You're an amazing artist :)
    Though, thats second to your amazing writing skills. Because this last chapter was so great! Unsurprisingly it was awesome; unsurprising because we're all well aware of your gift for writing. It was such a great chapter, and so exciting! It got to the point where i was so excited that I was reading faster and faster...until I read too fast and ran out of story to read D;
    So please write more! I'm super excited for the next chapter! Keep up the magnificent work :)

    Sincerely,
    August 19th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    What the heeeeelllll??? I didn't expect you to use the idea for a BAD GUY! WAAAAAH!!! NooOOOOoOoOo! I feel like I've aided in your evil plot :( Haha. But I still love how you did it!

    I love the paintings too, though I find I like him much better when he's masked, 'cause the mysterious quality is just too sexy. XD

    I really love the story, and can't wait to see what you do with the rest of this one, and what AntiHero will be like! Hehe. I'm kind of worried about what Faye knows about Hero that Elena doesn't know, though, so...yeah. I bet you wanted me to say that, 'cause you just have this way of manipulating me. Haha. :)

    Until next time, then!
    August 18th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • ClaudiaBiedles

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    *gasp* Loved it all, I don't even know what to say! Umm, the drawings are great and I cannot wait to read AntiHero x).

    Whoever gave you the idea of having another character have supertech powers was a genius. It gives your story a twist knowing that the big, mighty superhero has someone who is stronger than him. I like it :).
    August 18th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • kissmyoops

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    Someone's been quite a busy bee :)
    August 17th, 2011 at 09:35pm
  • topless

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    DAMMIT FAYE. JUST GO AWAY!
    Lmao.

    He'll catch her. He has to. Cause I said.
    Loved the update, and the painting! /fans self
    ANTIHERO!? WHAT!? Ack.
    You're just awesome and amazing and the update was so cool and that twist made me want to scream with anger and glee and you're writing is perfect ad I just love you.
    August 17th, 2011 at 09:24pm
  • horserideraja

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    WHERED THE EDIT BUTTON GO???

    oh well. i forgot to ask, what art program do you use to make the paintings? cause ive been dying for one but idk which to choose XD
    August 17th, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • horserideraja

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    ah ohmygod. i love you. and then i hate you. its like... i want you to update because i love reading this BUT I HATE WHEN YOU LEAVE ME ON A CLIFF HANGER.

    how dare you.

    my friend, when is the next update? cause i cant wait.
    August 17th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • eragorn122

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    D; This is horrible!!
    August 17th, 2011 at 07:08pm
  • Avngd7XGirl

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    OMG!! Hero is soo drop dead gorgeous ;) and i like the twist you threw in. keep up the good work :D
    August 17th, 2011 at 05:34pm
  • lil_angel666

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    OK so excited to see where your going with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    update again soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
    August 17th, 2011 at 09:52am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 19: Where the fuck did this Faye character come from??? I already hate her and I want her to die already! >.< and btw, thank you for posting a picture of Hero....he's gorgeous! ;D

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    August 17th, 2011 at 06:59am
  • St_Atrocity

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    Hero be looking FIIIIIIIINE, gurl (;

    And oh, the theories dancing through my head.
    But I'll keep them to my little ol' self.
    August 17th, 2011 at 06:53am
  • lil_angel666

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    whoa that was way cool!

    loce the pep talk Hero gave, very um... peppy?

    anyway, update again soon!!!
    August 5th, 2011 at 09:55am