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What. The. Actual. Fuck?

NO! This cannot be happening! I could just cry D;! Please, dear author, let this be something evil that happened to take over Hero, and not Hero being in control of himself.

I will be so devastated if this is what it comes down to.

I am literally so confused on how the hell the story got to this point. What the fuck has ben happening? Where does he keep leaving to? Is this really the results of his psychopathy? ~gasp~ Maybe he has been using Elena this whole time and because of his pyschopathy, he can't feel any guilt because of it.

Oh. My. God!

Fabulous update c: I was waiting for him to do that. When she was no longer useful he was going to throw her out. I hope she kicks his ass and gets the new version in her :D

I KNEW IT WAS COMING. and now shes going to go back to the scientists and get the 2.0 in her brain and then she can come back and kick his ass for being such a douche to her. and then SHE can kill the damon and save the world.

the end<3

thank you for the update you beautiful person.

I love this story. It is so well written and just wow...

I like this story a lot...so I subscribed!!! :D

Ohhh my god I'm going to rip my hair out over here
That file is just whoa
I thought of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban when Lupin would give Harry chocolate after practicing the Patronus spell
Oh and another TDK quote that made me think of this chapter
"I'm a twenty year man and I know the difference between the punks who need a lesson in manners and the freaks that like you that just enjoy it"

YOU'VE UPDATED SO MUCH!!!
Those last few chapters were AMAZING.
Hero kind of scared me for a moment and I'm still uneasy about him. >:|
Your writing is beautiful and delightful.
I love Death Note!

Poor Elena, having to deal with hearing about Sera all the time. :/ I feel so bad for her. Kudos to you, for making me feel sad for a fictional character. I want to go into your story and hug the ishh out of her.

<3 Until next time!!!

That was awesome :)
I've got a bad feeling about Hero now... I don't like this feeling... Grr...

Wow...
Just wow...
Not a bad "wow". A good "wow".
It just gets better and better. Twistier and twistier. I knew there was something wrong with Hero. He scares me :/ but I thought it was cool how you used the Joker as a metaphor. Awesome on your part, since Batman is my favorite superhero, and the Dark Knight is my favorite of the trilogy (so far).
Loved it! But Elena is frustrating me since she can't seem to grasp that Hero is manipulating her.*covers face in shame*.
I'm sad that you can't update for a while, but I promise to be patient and not constantly ask for an update :) mostly because I understand the whole school thing.

Still, I can't wait for the next update!
Keep up the fantasmical work! And good luck in school!

Sincerely,

Well actually that makes sense now, how he's able to kill so many peoples without eventually breaking down
Also its only seen for them to be crazy because they are usually associated with sociopaths and they do have a tendency to be quite violent if you get on their bad side

also only update when you can, I know how much school can weigh you down
I mean I haven't update any of my stories since like last year
Anyway, love the chaps update when you can!

Had three chapters to read. *sigh* I feel so disappointed in Hero right now. I guess the psychopathy makes sense now; he never looked guilty about talking about Sera (or was it Sara o_e?) with Elena, which I found very odd.

I mean, I still love his character and all, but he's just kind of creeping me out right now. Especially that time when he was enraged that someone--Faye in this situation--could be better than him. Does he only like the praise he gets for being a hero and not doing it for world peace? He also seems to be messing with Elena's head a bit, hah. One minute she's doubting him, and then he turns on the charm, and she asks herself how she could ever think he's done wrong or has faults.

So, yeah, I'm a little iffy right now. Although, I'd like to wish you a good education and have a fun time in school :)! Just...update when ya can I guess ;).

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

You used my suggestion that she was compatible? WHAAAAT?! And SHIZZSHIZZSHIZZ, I was desperately wishing my misgivings about Hero were wrong. I mean, I know it doesn't really mean he's evil, but it still worries me. :(

I can't wait for more, but I won't beg for an update. I start school next week, too. XD Tomorrow, in fact, since it's 12:01 here. XD

Glad I was proved right :)

Haha!
I had a guess that she would be compatable. :)
I have to admit that I freaking love Deathnote.
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Chapter 22:....................I'm literally speechless right now. I have no clue how to respond to all of this!!
Can't wait for the next update<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

so this is a "season" finale? as in the story is definately not over? cause if it ended there i would metaphorically strangle you with all my questions. <3

DAMN IT, THAT SENTENCE WAS MY SECOND GUESS.
meh, close enough.

But don't the average psychopaths not feel emotions such as love as well? If that's the case with Hero, what is he doing with her? I don't know, it kind of makes me suspicious of all the time he spends with her. Psychopaths tend to use charm and sex and things of the like to get what they want and he has DEFINITELY charmed her.

Chapter 21: Holy crap! I definately didn't see that coming! I can't believe she's compatable to be a test subject.....but what if Hero already knew that?!?! And who was that woman???

Update soon<33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

((I secretly forgot what happened to his mom, BUT...regardless...)) so was that his mom?

I didn't find the clue, lol. :P
But I can't wait to find out what is in store for this story. :)
I agree with the above comments, she really needs a happy ending after all this.
Update soon!
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